Human, after all.
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The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board ![]() Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786 ![]() ![]() | So, where to begin on our journey across the waters to Cruithne? The strange old place that reels in tourists by the scruff of the neck and kicks them around like rubbish and wishes them a fond farewell. With its wrinkled and wretched women and their shaking, chilver daughters. The men grow like weeds to be poisoned by the crops they grow. Day by day the population shrinks and looks more and more like the solid remnants of dirty dishwater in the proverbial kitchen sink. Why we go is an unanswerable question. String and cellotape hold our minds together and unflappable as we may seem, we are but human, after all. The roads are treacherous indeed, rotting animals girning at the sides, glorifying the everlasting beauty of the natural world being destroyed by the big, bad wolf. Wolves died out years ago, we killed them and made their howl last forever in the glitter of the moonlight, the spark of youthful anticipation. But how we rage against the animal kingdom with all their teeth and claws and stings. Who would have thought we could kill everything? Nothing is beyond reason as we commit treason and assassinate our animalistic Royal family with pesticides, biocides, insecticides and commit genocide again and again. Oh, we raise our weary cry, we are but human, after all. So the waters still and the sun dies for the evening, painting her blood on the sky like a Turner prize artist, art of nothing but the old shock-horror that affects no one anymore. Immune to reality, immune to care. "You deserve everything you get." We say when things go wrong and bombs drop on babies heads and pensioners legs and when the girl is deflowered against her will. How we cry innocence when terrible things happen to us, bankruptcy and repossession but we shed no tear when it happens to others. "Why me?" they mutter at the dead of night and we just reply to the windy whimper "You deserve everything you get." At Cruithne we will dine on beetroot and a human hand dipped in honey. Sell our clothes for the money to pay for our feast and no one will consider us peculiar as we stride around, bulbous and pale in the moonlight. For tonight the Earth is taken by the animal kingdom once again. The uprising will be quick and the agony slow, riding it out over thousands of years of toying with emotions. "Why us!" the human race cries in a thousand languages. To this delightful scream, we simply reply: "You deserve everything you get, you are human, after all." |
SugarGreen King For A Couple Of Days ![]() Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 3369 | Such positively disgusting imagery... Good job. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days ![]() Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | It reads in a way not disimilar to a motivational speech, as if you were stood at a podium rallying for support. Okay, if this were your speech you might not be incredibly popular with the human race, but you would be to someone. ![]() And as always, your imagery is astounding. I particularly liked the 'dine on beteroot and a human hand dipped in honey', it just caught me. Sometimes I felt that it needed a little paring down, to make it a little less verbose, but other than that, I thought it read beautifully. |
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