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Tragic Jaren
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Tragic Jaren
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 1762

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May 14th, 2008 at 11:35pm
branded through combustion, sometimes i think you use words
that you don't actually know,
but beauty is so easy to mark through your dialogue.

you've got your melody twisted through your monotone
like suffocating overgrown weeds.
you blend together what should be so difficult to distinguish.

your thoughts crash in between what would be a casual stutter.
so quickly and quietly you pick it up,
and manipulate what could have ruined another realistic idea of you.
Jesse Lacey
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Jesse Lacey
Age: 30
Gender: Female
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May 15th, 2008 at 07:56pm
Jaren, that's REALLY good.
And I'm not just saying that, I mean it.
It's really good.
Though I don't understand it, I think that's when poetry is best.
When there isn't a clear definition of what the poem is about.

I love it. Smile
+ You have a wide use of vocabulary words.
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