Hows my songwriting???

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laks;;LICIOUS
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
laks;;LICIOUS
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 8
April 26th, 2008 at 05:49am
I wish so bad that we could go back
Back to the times where you said forever
And I believed we'd stay together

I have two inklings that this has no chance
More inklings join these lonely thoughts
But with all the hold-backs and set-backs
Why I am I still trying to love you like I did?

CHORUS
What the hell am I fighting for?
When it's not me that you adore
When all the lonely thoughts aren't mutual
And all the darkness I have to climb through myself
While you watch me struggle
And you watch the pain sink deeper
Let it sink
Just let me sink

You've changed too much for me to see
That there's a chance of loving me
Like you did when we just clicked
And when that one night was spent just keeping me up

CHORUS

Let the water run dry
Let the tears all roll out
Because what I've lost
Isn't worth fighting for
No, not anymore

CHORUS

Whoa
Just let me fuckinf sink!
fyre nyte
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
fyre nyte
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 7
June 2nd, 2008 at 06:59am
sweet! Smile can i use it for my band??
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