whatsername92
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 5 | May 25th, 2008 at 11:46pm My life and soul you've taken again
A secret of mine only one truly knows
Of coarse you remember
You were there for my last words
Under the willow tree
Where I mourned for your love to take over
But you belong to another
And you see my pain and misery
Almost feeling it all
Always with me, No one can harm me
Yet
You're the one doing the harm to me
How you say...My love for you
That you can't see
I'd give up everything for you
I always run to you
You know all of this
You know the resy...Yes this is true
Our captaviting secret from long ago
I long for that moment to happen again
Just to be with you
Here I'll be...
Awaiting, following you once again
Under your beloved
Willow Tree |
yellowstickerface
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 195 | June 4th, 2008 at 12:44am Pretty good.
I don't get it tho, but that's because of the use of metophorical cliche's, but it obviously means alot to you.
would make a nice song if you added a chorus or something.
crit the song in my sig please. |
