Not green day related, just a poem i wrote about moonlight x

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Heavy Sky
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Heavy Sky
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April 15th, 2008 at 09:55am
Sitting, with white light upon my face
And shadows, black as a panther in the night
Enormous, Glowing, brilliant and beautiful
The moon, in all its powerful glory
Shining, as always, with beauty, and passion
Strength, and love, emotions gone wild
Beauty of nightime, and wishes on light
Tenderness, of soft light, mild and stoney
creamy colored, shining in pride of place
At the center of the moonlit sky
There stands he so proud and dominant
Now, I do know the truest, and purest meaning to the word 'beauty'

R.E.Chaney

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Heavy Sky
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April 18th, 2008 at 06:14am
Please critique
Heavy Sky
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Heavy Sky
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July 2nd, 2008 at 11:24am
Please! i would really like it!
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