Preschool Drop-Out.
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Posts: 20 | June 25th, 2008 at 11:44pm Hooked claws, at the end
sliding down the screen.
Like falling prisms
from the skies eyes.
My mouth words,
seem to bother you.
Lips move, words more bitter,
than pure lemon juice.
Back bends, like a snake,
as if no spine at all.
Extra knuckles come
reaching farther than before.
Mirror image, total opposite,
backwards...it may seem.
Up and down, jumping,
I go up, image comes down.
Smiling, or at least trying
Image, turns it to frown.
Whistles, with boiling
water in its stomach.
Dialated, black gets bigger.
The color fades away.
Lightning files down,
in jagged lines, hitting the ground |
PCG
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  | June 26th, 2008 at 04:14pm That poem fucking rocks. You could do this for a living. |
Preschool Drop-Out.
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Posts: 20 | June 26th, 2008 at 09:04pm thanks, so much!!!!!!! |
Joshontheguitar
Geek
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Posts: 222 | June 30th, 2008 at 09:33pm "Extra knuckles come
reaching farther than before."
I like =) |
Preschool Drop-Out.
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Posts: 20 | July 1st, 2008 at 12:49am thanks  |
vieclamtuyendung
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Posts: 9 | June 3rd, 2010 at 05:30am "Xin viec lam duoc ngay tai www.VieclamTuyendung.vn voi 5.000+viec lam luong cao, hap dan.
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"Xin viec lam duoc ngay tai www.vieclamtuyendung.vn voi 5000+ viec lam luong cao, hap dan. Tim viec lam phu hop cho tung ung vien.
Trang viec lam tuyen dung truc tuyen hang dau ho tro gui ho so cho NTD ngay sau 1 gio dang tuyen.
Tim viec lam phu hop cho tung ung vien dang ho so.
Dung bo lo co hoi xin viec lam duoc ngay tai www.VieclamTuyendung.vn voi 5.000+viec lam luong cao, hap dan." |
jabble524
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Posts: 22 | June 16th, 2010 at 12:09pm I like this poem. Very vivid and it has a nice flow to it. |
