...and she cries

Ignored at school
Ignored at home
Cries is shame
She's all alone

Nowhere to run
Nowhere to hide
Looks for something
But there's nothing to find

She claims there is
This one special thing
And if she doesn't find it
He heart will truly sting.

There's no one to help her
No one to ask
She's on her own
And she'll just let it pass

If only she had someone
Someone to love
She looks to the sky
For a sign from above

She has nothing
Nothing at all
Her self esteem is crushed
She doesn't stand tall

All she wants
Is one little kiss
From someone she loves
That she doesn't want to miss

She's loosing herself
She's falling apart
She can't live anymore
So steaks her heart

But then she wakes up
It was all a dream
And sees that things
Aren't what they seem

Still by her bedside
Lays the knife
She makes her descision
To not end her life

She is so confused
Still doesn't know what to find
But this is the one thing
That's stuck in her mind

This girl you see here
Does not want to be
A nothing on the streets
Because this girl is me

She wants to be somebody
Like the ones on TV
So pretty and skinny
But she'll never be

But she must deal
With who she is
This is the life
She has to live


I know this is very confusing...I wrote it in like 5 minutes

i think its good, i loved the rhythm and the rhyming, good job. *gives cookie*

I realy like it, its really like… woah… =]
its good… very touching… really…

awwww
that is soo true.....
it was great!
i love it!
and the rhyming was very good!
great job!

i agree with all the wonderful people who commented on this beautiful and amazing poem. It's really good. I love you rhyme scheme. Awesome. Amazing. Keep writing, kid. =]

wow this is well written and even though you say you wrote it in five minutes it is well-thought out and organised
the rhyming scheme keeps the flow of the poem, and lends it a dream-like quality
great job
x

this is really awesome and in 5 minutes? wow you got talent !