Broken by your words.

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Stay_Brutal!
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Stay_Brutal!
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April 22nd, 2010 at 10:18pm
I can feel the tears. They are deep inside.
I can feel them coming. So I try to hide.
I dont want you to have the satisfaction of seeing me cry.

Your words cutt me deep.
All the things you say, that I know you mean.
I try not to care.
I try to fight back.
But some days I am weak and it hurts too bad.

You can sense my weakness.
You know exactly what to say.
You know what it takes to break me.
And to cause me pain.

I hide very well.
Behind a "i dont care" mask.
But you always end up winning.
Cause I always crack.

It wouldnt be as bad if I could get away from you.
But your always here.
I wish I didnt have to take this but there is no other way.
I could leave and find some other place.
But I have nowhere else to go and so here I stay.
Forever to be a victim.
Of your verbal hate.


This is my first poem....... Tell me what you think??
jabble524
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June 16th, 2010 at 12:11pm
I like it.
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August 6th, 2010 at 12:08am
i love this. !!!!!
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