My favorite singer is gone

Age: 30
Gender: Female
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April 4th, 2012 at 12:53pm
The days are like petals
the nights are too long
my heart is like metal
my favorite singer is gone

Did he have to go
i didn't say goodbye
I should of said no
but now I can cry

He is now gone
I can't bring him back
he didn't stay long
I now feel like black

So life is like metals
Days are too long
the days are like petals
my favorite singer is gone

This is a poem I wrote about Gerry Rafferty who died last year. I also wrote this on mibba. It is one of my first poems. Please give me your feedback.
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platypus of suburbia
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March 14th, 2013 at 02:45pm
This is really good. I like the simpleness