Gerry Addict
![Gerry](/data/board-avatars/00002/138784612640815.png) Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 10821
![Blog](/data/images/blog.gif) | April 4th, 2012 at 12:53pm The days are like petals
the nights are too long
my heart is like metal
my favorite singer is gone
Did he have to go
i didn't say goodbye
I should of said no
but now I can cry
He is now gone
I can't bring him back
he didn't stay long
I now feel like black
So life is like metals
Days are too long
the days are like petals
my favorite singer is gone
This is a poem I wrote about Gerry Rafferty who died last year. I also wrote this on mibba. It is one of my first poems. Please give me your feedback. |
platypus of suburbia Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
![platypus of suburbia](/data/board-avatars/00003/136326622909003.jpeg) Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 12 | March 14th, 2013 at 02:45pm This is really good. I like the simpleness |