I've no idea what to call this.
I could paint you a picture
With all the blood that I’ve bled
And I could sing you a song,
With the words from my head.
I could write you a story,
Like no other you’ve read.
And I could scare you breathless,
With the creatures under my bed.
I could make your heart ache,
A trick I’ve learned well.
I could sell my soul to the Devil,
To ensure my place in Hell.
I could make myself cry,
And then lock up my shell.
I could put on a play,
And pretend you know me well.
But to avoid all the pain that these things would cause,
You could close your eyes tight and forget what once was.
I could make myself disappear, without a single pause.
And for all the things that I could do…
This would earn the most applause.
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I started this a while ago, but never really finished it... Now, it's finished.
Please tell me what you think. Any suggestions for a title would be great too =]
With all the blood that I’ve bled
And I could sing you a song,
With the words from my head.
I could write you a story,
Like no other you’ve read.
And I could scare you breathless,
With the creatures under my bed.
I could make your heart ache,
A trick I’ve learned well.
I could sell my soul to the Devil,
To ensure my place in Hell.
I could make myself cry,
And then lock up my shell.
I could put on a play,
And pretend you know me well.
But to avoid all the pain that these things would cause,
You could close your eyes tight and forget what once was.
I could make myself disappear, without a single pause.
And for all the things that I could do…
This would earn the most applause.
***
I started this a while ago, but never really finished it... Now, it's finished.
Please tell me what you think. Any suggestions for a title would be great too =]
Thank you ^_^
And... I don't know how to explain what it's about. It's just... kinda... my life when I'm not in the greatest of moods O_O?
The Kill, December 25th, 2007 at 04:29:25pm
ohwow.
i have no idea what to say.
this is amazing.
end of story.
lekzi, December 25th, 2007 at 03:14:09am
i could come up with a title...but i just wanna know what its about. i mean i kno wat its about but i mean like is it a breakup, a get together...u know wat i mean?
PenguinPunk, December 24th, 2007 at 05:33:53am
Ooooo, I like it.
ROSLYNN, December 24th, 2007 at 04:54:04am
Nicely written !
:D as for a title: "All the things I could do"
Hmm. just a suggestion though.
Sunshine., December 23rd, 2007 at 08:09:31pm
Very good, much better than what I could write. It flows nicely and it seems like you put alot of work and emotion into it. I like it :]
Opiate of the Masses, December 23rd, 2007 at 04:29:35pm