Fail
So here's a poem I wrote. It may be terrible but atleast I gave It a shot. I wrote this aftert I had that Big long cry that I know I'm gonna fail at life and gonna live a terrible one, and is the most mirsiable person out there. I felt that way for the last month or so and I don't know what's rong.
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What I do in this world doesn't matter,
All my dreams just seem to shatter.
Do it once and fail,
you can't try agan,
Sucess is a place I've never been.
Thoughts of anguish dictate my mind,
Of all things, I'll never leave you behind.
Insomina takes over my night,
Nothing in my life will ever be right.
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you like it?
cause the other side of me hates it.
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What I do in this world doesn't matter,
All my dreams just seem to shatter.
Do it once and fail,
you can't try agan,
Sucess is a place I've never been.
Thoughts of anguish dictate my mind,
Of all things, I'll never leave you behind.
Insomina takes over my night,
Nothing in my life will ever be right.
________
you like it?
cause the other side of me hates it.
you diamond!
thats quite fabulous, you should add more
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fatty., September 10th, 2008 at 04:02:26am
Wow. Holy sh*t, that is good! Keep goin Nina!
PCG, September 8th, 2008 at 12:46:51pm
it's pretty good,
minus all the spelling mistakes x]
but it's good, add more!
hollywood tragedy., September 7th, 2008 at 02:47:43am
I'm not really into poetry, but it's alright. You should add more to it.
Skippy., September 7th, 2008 at 02:29:14am