my song of my band,whatya think?

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jonny krapuul
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August 29th, 2005 at 01:05pm
i play in a band as the bass artist(the band's named :'dangerous junkfood in you're houseroom')and i just wrote a song
i'm gonna itroduce it to you first and say whatya think of
oh yeah i aint got a title yet so if you can help me with that one help me then!



the song:


1:
hope i find you
cuz you made me puke
in some cheap old booz bar where i am myself without you
you're a bitch but you look like a dude
and that's why i think i puke of you!!!!!

chorus:
woooow-wooow-wo-o-ow
the road of life has so many bumps,that i ain't even surprised of you
you bastard of a dog pissed on my shoes but you got no clue
i think bush even can't compare to you!!!!!


2:now i thought that you could help
but instead you make it worse
i saw you when that crook stealing you're purse...
and i knew you're a bitch but you looked like a dude!
that's why i puke of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!


chorus




intermezzo: wooooooooooooooooooww-wo-ow you're that kind of women with big heels and with a big mouth, and i hate that sound!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(scream sound 3 times )



wow,i saw you last night,and you look bright
you're were beautiful and that's when i thought,i hope she's still fuckable!!!


chorus 2 times



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Relion
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August 29th, 2005 at 01:06pm
I think it's in the wrong section..?
jonny krapuul
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August 29th, 2005 at 01:07pm
yeah sorry ,but whacha think?
Dom
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August 29th, 2005 at 01:08pm
is there no music to it? just erm..words..??
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August 29th, 2005 at 01:10pm
yeah,there's music but i ain't gonna place a bass tabb off some notes on here,first my drummer and my 2 guitar playters have got to play there stuff to the song
XxJesusOfSuburbiaxX
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August 30th, 2005 at 11:23am
Wow, erm, a little obscure don't you think?
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August 30th, 2005 at 12:31pm
i don't get it. is it suppose to lack of grammar? cuz if it had some grammar, i might understand it.
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August 30th, 2005 at 02:35pm
i dont get it... what is it?! how long did it take you to write that down?
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August 31st, 2005 at 12:05pm
sorry guys sorry...
i just only write 8 songs before....
i mean ,i'm nt gonna introduce that to my band,y'all think it sucks fuckin' big time...
well thanx for youre opinion,and i really don't understand...my poems are better than my songs











jesus(of suburbia)hell,i read it again and it stinks...
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September 15th, 2005 at 04:31pm
Heres my lyrics (and their better than yours)
verse 1:
shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit

chorus:
fuck shit fuck shit fuck shit ass whipe

verse 2
fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck

chorus again

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September 15th, 2005 at 09:35pm
i wrote a song about a girl i met on GSB and i think its waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better than that but i don't think u met this girl on GSB tho
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September 15th, 2005 at 09:40pm
i dont like it...
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September 15th, 2005 at 10:07pm
Umm...you call that a song, do you?
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September 15th, 2005 at 10:46pm
its pretty good just its hard to get
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September 19th, 2005 at 05:14pm
that sucked on ice Smile
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May 20th, 2006 at 08:38pm
ok..............what? *runs and hides*
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May 21st, 2006 at 01:22am
XxJesusOfSuburbiaxX:
Wow, erm, a little obscure don't you think?
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May 23rd, 2006 at 09:49am
kinda lame lyrics...Havent you got something better to say to the world than this?

But maybe it's ok if the musics good...but ehm...it kinda sux...I think
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