The Fire Series

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Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 7th, 2006 at 05:57am I give you, Chapter 14
ThisIsGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board Age: 41 Gender: Female Posts: 6877	July 9th, 2006 at 12:39am billiejocrazeds: I Love Tre... hes soooooooo HOT I think its hot when guys makeout with each other! You should be banned for spam. Or shot. Whichever. MICHELLE!!! UPDATE EVEN MORE!!!
~Sexxi~Tre~ Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 259	July 9th, 2006 at 04:02am YEEEEEEEEEESSS! CHAPTER 14 HAS ARRIVED
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 9th, 2006 at 04:42pm Just when you thought it was safe.... CHAPTER 15
Pickle Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 461	July 10th, 2006 at 04:50pm I'm currently sitting on Chapter 2 of The Fire and I am all ready impressed. She's not a Lola-named piece of jailbait who wants to jump Billie Joe's bones! You have a good sense of detailing, history and storytelling. I'm really enjoying it so far.
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 10th, 2006 at 05:56pm Pickle: I'm currently sitting on Chapter 2 of The Fire and I am all ready impressed. She's not a Lola-named piece of jailbait who wants to jump Billie Joe's bones! You have a good sense of detailing, history and storytelling. I'm really enjoying it so far. blushes Thanks for the honest feedback Though I did feel like I rushed it a bit especially in those first chapters... As I said that OC was created in 1986 so I have a HUGE amount of background for her that I have been leaking in here and there in the story...
Pickle Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 461	July 10th, 2006 at 08:35pm Yeah, it was a little rushed, but not so much that I couldn't understand what was going on.
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 10th, 2006 at 08:57pm You also can tell the grammer was off.. You can tell when I became an editor as the grammer became much better. Not that it was horrible before hand or anything OHHH an the part 1 was actually a stand alone piece I wrote using what is called 'Guided Imagery' A leader reads a small paragraph or couple of sentences and you must continue that paragraph being as descriptive as possible. I submitted that to GSB and decided to use it as a 'Prologue' and insert my OC and GD. It worked well...
~Sexxi~Tre~ Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 259	July 11th, 2006 at 04:40am I've just read part 15 and loved it as ever. Can't wait for the next part and hope its coming soon. What's Beth's story and when is Jill going to be in it... so much happening... My mum is also reading the story as you know and she says its so good and don't be long getting the next part out.
~Sexxi~Tre~ Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 259	July 11th, 2006 at 04:41am Whose that in your AVA. he looks a little Mike Dirntish!!
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 11th, 2006 at 05:01am ~Sexxi~Tre~: Whose that in your AVA. he looks a little Mike Dirntish!! THAT is my husband age 18 in 1973... and Mr. Dirnt more than likely close to the same age... BOTH bass players... brothers seperated at birth??
~Sexxi~Tre~ Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 259	July 11th, 2006 at 05:59am Oh my god they are so alike?!?!? Cute
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 11th, 2006 at 09:48am I'm a writing fool, I give you Chapter 16
~Sexxi~Tre~ Geek Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 259	July 11th, 2006 at 10:09am Been there and done that... Fantastic work ..... awaits now for 17
ThisIsGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board Age: 41 Gender: Female Posts: 6877	July 13th, 2006 at 09:41pm I'll write mine, if you write yours.
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 13th, 2006 at 09:42pm ThisIsGreenDay: I'll write mine, if you write yours. silleh Mike whore... I already gots chapter 17 DONE.... Just haven't submitted it yet You want me to get to Feed the Flames...
ThisIsGreenDay Falling In Love With The Board Age: 41 Gender: Female Posts: 6877	July 13th, 2006 at 09:47pm sampalletband: ThisIsGreenDay: I'll write mine, if you write yours. silleh Mike whore... Damn straight, silleh trehooligan. sampalletband: I already gots chapter 17 DONE.... Just haven't submitted it yet Well, then...part 18...get on it, whore! sampalletband: You want me to get to Feed the Flames... Maybeh.
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 13th, 2006 at 09:49pm ThisIsGreenDay: sampalletband: ThisIsGreenDay: I'll write mine, if you write yours. silleh Mike whore... Damn straight, silleh trehooligan. sampalletband: I already gots chapter 17 DONE.... Just haven't submitted it yet Well, then...part 18...get on it, whore! sampalletband: You want me to get to Feed the Flames... Maybeh. SNORT
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 15th, 2006 at 09:35pm walks into thread to lovingly place Chapter 17 in the room
davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018	July 15th, 2006 at 09:54pm Just read it...awesome!

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