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Rhiannon. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 2999	July 3rd, 2006 at 10:16pm read me new stroy please http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/fan/story/6960/0/ I worked hard on this, sooo... if you would, read, comment, and rate? [/url]
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 3rd, 2006 at 11:17pm I read this as I edited it to post it... It's a different slant on things... interesting.
Rhiannon. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 2999	July 3rd, 2006 at 11:20pm thanks? Im not to sure how to respond
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 3rd, 2006 at 11:22pm It's good writing.... I'll be looking to reading more Sorry about being vague.. didn't mean to...
Rhiannon. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 2999	July 3rd, 2006 at 11:24pm oh ok hehe. But, how do I post the next bit? Cause there doesnt seem to be a link...
Banach95 King For A Couple Of Days Age: 51 Gender: Female Posts: 4870	July 3rd, 2006 at 11:25pm Your Mom Is A Man Whore: oh ok hehe. But, how do I post the next bit? Cause there doesnt seem to be a link... http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/board/viewtopic.php?t=45158 read this
Rhiannon. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 2999	July 3rd, 2006 at 11:25pm much appreciated, thanks
Rhiannon. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 2999	July 16th, 2006 at 10:12am anyways... read it?
Pickle Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 461	July 16th, 2006 at 11:40am It's definatly interesting. Your title is what made me look twice at it. I'm curious to see how that comes into play. My biggest concern is that there's not as much emotion in it that should be. You're trying to up it but it's not flowing very well to the reader. Don't focus so much on the words for emotion, but the actions and the small stuff. Very interesting. I shall try to keep up with it.
Rhiannon. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 2999	July 18th, 2006 at 01:05pm ok.

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