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Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | August 26th, 2006 at 06:08pm I have submitted a new story, "The Ghost Of You". I just submitted Part 2, which should be up pretty soon, whenever it gets edited. Anyhoo, here's Part One.
Here's the summary of the plot:
Tré meets a girl at a bar, Brie, and takes her home after getting to know her and such. They have a half-drunken night of lust, then wake up the next morning and Tré takes her home, but not after confessing some stuff to her. They fall for each other, and hard. Through all of this, Billie acts weird around her, as if he hates her or something. Then she goes on tour with them for 4 months, and Tré makes a big decision about her. Afterwards, they go through some really tough things that no couple should have to go through, and Tré and Brie's lives pretty much rip apart at the seams, even after as hard as they're trying to keep everything together.
So, first of all: the plot in this story takes time to build up, so if you don't like stories that take time to build up, this isn't the story for you.
And second of all: I love comments and I love to hear what people think of my writing and my story and everything, so please comment my story if you read it. I don't care if you rate it, do as you please. But comments are appreciated.
And lastly: If you want me to PM you when a new part is posted... I will. Yeah, it might take forever, but I don't have a life, so I'll do it as soon as possible. I like to be reliable. =]
So, that is all for now.
xxx |
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 51
Gender: Female
Posts: 4870
  | August 26th, 2006 at 09:28pm LOVE this story... though I have to admit I found it elsewhere at a place I can NOT name...
Great story!! |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | August 26th, 2006 at 10:34pm Haha thank you =p
Uhh...
*cough*comingclean?*cough* |
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 51
Gender: Female
Posts: 4870
| August 26th, 2006 at 10:39pm no linking....LOL
Yea but it's not posted at the other site... Just read part 5  |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | August 26th, 2006 at 11:50pm Haha I never linked =p
Sweeeeeet. What other site?
Aaaand awesome! You should totes comment. You have an LJ? |
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 51
Gender: Female
Posts: 4870
| August 27th, 2006 at 12:10am the site where you just posted chappy 5 on
I can't mention the site... COUGHslash_unslashCOUGH |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | August 27th, 2006 at 12:47am OH!
haha, sweet =D
for reals, though.
you should comment over there.
aaaand if you have an *cough*LJ*cough*
you should PM me and tell me what it is. =] |
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 51
Gender: Female
Posts: 4870
| August 27th, 2006 at 12:50am I commented to one of your stories tehre... same screen name... I HAVE a LJ but I don't have anything on/in it. Same goes for myspace... got one... don't have anything in/on it.
PS I use the same screen name EVERYWHERE... ever see this name... it's me  |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | August 27th, 2006 at 12:59am SWEET!
thanks. =] |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | August 28th, 2006 at 08:23pm |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | September 1st, 2006 at 11:58am Mhm. Part Three.
As usual, comments are extremely appreciated, and if you want me to PM you when new parts are up, just say so. =] |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | September 13th, 2006 at 09:52pm Woo!
Well, only a few people seem to be reading this, but that's okay. I love them all =]
Part Four. |
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 51
Gender: Female
Posts: 4870
| September 13th, 2006 at 11:02pm Squishy Cool:Woo!
Well, only a few people seem to be reading this, but that's okay. I love them all =]
Part Four.
I'm reading it at the other site...
Can't wait to see part 11 over there... |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | September 14th, 2006 at 12:01am Thank you =D |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | September 18th, 2006 at 07:30pm |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | November 13th, 2006 at 01:04am chyeahh, part seven is up. =] |
