I'm thinking about taking a turn in my story.... please read and comment if you like to read fanfics! It's very important!

I made it that (this girl in my story) can play guitar very very well. (And this is a Green Day story) but she doesn't have a guitar. When Billie asks her about it, (I'll just do a sample dialogue for you)

"What happened to it?" he asked.
She held her breath. She and Jen were the only ones that knew about it, and she had kept it secret. "Can you keep a total secret?" she almost whispered.
He nodded and looked at her almost confused, not knowing what could possibly had happened to it.
She looked down at her lap. "I sold it..." she slowly looked up at him. "For a fix."
He stared at her eyes that seemed as if she could break down any second, soaking in her words.
"I fix?" he quietly questioned, the meaning not quite hitting him yet. She stayed silent for a moment. Then it hit him.
"Ooooh. A fix" he was a bit scared now, knowing that the fixing she was referring to was some type of addiction.
She nodded slowly. "I used," she took a deep breath. He was the only person she had told apart from Jen. "I used to be a cocain addict."
Tears came to the corners of her eyes.
He pulled her close to his chest, her head in his shoulder. She let out a short sob. Then she looked up at him. "I'm clean now, for about three years."
He was relived to hear that she was done, and he hugged her tight again.

^What do you think? It's a totally different story then a sad story. Actually, it's quite exciting. As I described in the story so far, no one would have EVER guessed that she used to, ahem, be a cocaini addict. Or maybe I'll make it herione. Any drug suggestions? Oh, and if you would like the link to my story, just ask!
Posted on January 20th, 2007 at 10:41pm

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