open waters
her eyes glisten
with the slight of
hopes and dream
with oceans
filled with laughter
and moutains cracked with memories
rivers of unspoken words
branches holding her down
as the rain pours down
she watches the world before her glisten
just as her eyes did to him
eh i dont really know why i wrote it, i wrote it for my girlfriend, who made me post it.
i like imagery what can i say
.
with the slight of
hopes and dream
with oceans
filled with laughter
and moutains cracked with memories
rivers of unspoken words
branches holding her down
as the rain pours down
she watches the world before her glisten
just as her eyes did to him
eh i dont really know why i wrote it, i wrote it for my girlfriend, who made me post it.
i like imagery what can i say
. 
it's good matt, i agree to R-Starr though. you should check the last two lines, actually it's more the last line if you ask me XD
try to write some more lines about the poem, why you wrote it, what it means to you etc, otherwise it might not be blog-worth material
*huggles*
Love, April 1st, 2008 at 07:19:41am
:O wow thats amazingg
Ensiferum, March 31st, 2008 at 09:33:29pm
Oouu. I like it. The last two lines I'm not sure about, though. Otherwise, very good.
ROSLYNN, March 31st, 2008 at 09:05:26pm
because its really good!!
kayy !, March 31st, 2008 at 09:05:09pm