It Was Enchatement.
I stuck my tongue out as much as I could
And the air felt edible,
And life was fresh.
Your common sense was replaced
With entertainment and I understood
That you could taste the sky too
And the stars and the ground
-they were all so sweet.
In exquisite joys we have bathed
And shared our stories in strange languages,
-you have recited verses
And I got rid of all our last pains.
The sun was alluring
And your music constantly broken
With my laughter.
I saw you die happily in my arms;
It was enchantment.
I have realized that I am too shy about the things I write and maybe posting it here will help me get some feedback and be more confident about the whole thing. I just want to try to do better and be better.
I dont think this poem needs mich explanation. It just celebrates the joy and happiness of life and love.
And the air felt edible,
And life was fresh.
Your common sense was replaced
With entertainment and I understood
That you could taste the sky too
And the stars and the ground
-they were all so sweet.
In exquisite joys we have bathed
And shared our stories in strange languages,
-you have recited verses
And I got rid of all our last pains.
The sun was alluring
And your music constantly broken
With my laughter.
I saw you die happily in my arms;
It was enchantment.
I have realized that I am too shy about the things I write and maybe posting it here will help me get some feedback and be more confident about the whole thing. I just want to try to do better and be better.
I dont think this poem needs mich explanation. It just celebrates the joy and happiness of life and love.
Ivana I don't get you. In a good way. I don't understand how amazing you are and manage to create something fabulous like this. Awesome :) You should write to Fry with this and he'll fall in love with you and invite you to come live with him ;)
wfougoafoihqfe, January 1st, 2009 at 03:55:02pm
Thank you very much, this means a lot to me :)
worn-out astronaut., November 14th, 2008 at 10:50:37am
This may very well be the most beautiful thing I've ever read.
PCG, November 13th, 2008 at 05:41:31pm
this is beautiful. it's easily one of the best poems i've read on here. you have a wonderful talent.
get famous, November 13th, 2008 at 04:53:00pm