Playing with fire
He stops to buy hamburgers in the stall on wheel. He wears Converse, some oversized plaid shirt, a sun visor and sunglasses although it's dark outside since long.
My hair smells of his cigarette smoke.
He means trouble. Known by the police, throwing the biggest parties, arrenging competitions with friends - the winner is the one who fucked the most - charged for various crimes.
But he is charming, and he knows it. He's so good at using it. He even makes me forget about all his problems that so easily could be passed on to me if I'm not careful enough.
His embrace was soft. I wish it would have lasted longer.
He's toxic. I need to stay away.
But resisting to follow impulses and feelings has never been harder than this. It's so hard when your brain says one thing and your heart another.
My hair smells of his cigarette smoke.
He means trouble. Known by the police, throwing the biggest parties, arrenging competitions with friends - the winner is the one who fucked the most - charged for various crimes.
But he is charming, and he knows it. He's so good at using it. He even makes me forget about all his problems that so easily could be passed on to me if I'm not careful enough.
His embrace was soft. I wish it would have lasted longer.
He's toxic. I need to stay away.
But resisting to follow impulses and feelings has never been harder than this. It's so hard when your brain says one thing and your heart another.
This is very well written and constructed. Shame its so short!
Trusty Chords., June 14th, 2009 at 03:41:37pm
This is really good. I love the way you write, how in just a few words you can describe so many feelings.
Joshua Gayward., June 13th, 2009 at 02:34:20pm
Listen to both.
Here's how:
Be with him, by all means. Just invest in some pepperspray. :)
Btw, this is really good.
PCG, June 13th, 2009 at 12:55:53am
I love this, it's really lovely the way it's written and the way it plainly states all his flaws and blantantly obvious reasons to stay away yet it's nearly impossible to do so with the impulses of the human heart. It's as if it shows you how we can take the cruelest and foulest of people, scrape them down and search out the good in them and so long as your heart wants to see it, it will continue to find good no matter how much your brain objects.
I adore this (:
Dale Cooper, June 12th, 2009 at 03:59:47am
I like this. :)
this is really good, actually.
Riot on the Radio, June 12th, 2009 at 02:38:43am