Uncomfrotably Numb
This is a poem I wrote when I was in the two years ago
Now about to start highschool in about a month I'm not quiet sure what inspired this
to be honest I think I was sitting in iss one day (I had it for 2 weeks, for other stupid actions) and was thinking about the boy that just broke up with me, the bordum and my parentes, it was a hard time, and I was a moody person with a lot to say, but no voice to say it with, now I've found one, and can't shut up,
My brains are seeping out of my ears
It's making a mess all over the carpet
My bones have turned to dust
getting mixed in with the rot
My organs a liquide
My eyes have become crusty stones
My eyelids have mealted off
Forcing me to look at this filthy world
Never to close
Only to see
What they've done to me
My heart nothing,not beating, but broken shards
A reminder of what it was
I am a disgusting pile of a broken girl
Who forgot how to find the hope in this hopless world
It only took one slip
I have become
Uncomfortably Numb
Now about to start highschool in about a month I'm not quiet sure what inspired this
to be honest I think I was sitting in iss one day (I had it for 2 weeks, for other stupid actions) and was thinking about the boy that just broke up with me, the bordum and my parentes, it was a hard time, and I was a moody person with a lot to say, but no voice to say it with, now I've found one, and can't shut up,
My brains are seeping out of my ears
It's making a mess all over the carpet
My bones have turned to dust
getting mixed in with the rot
My organs a liquide
My eyes have become crusty stones
My eyelids have mealted off
Forcing me to look at this filthy world
Never to close
Only to see
What they've done to me
My heart nothing,not beating, but broken shards
A reminder of what it was
I am a disgusting pile of a broken girl
Who forgot how to find the hope in this hopless world
It only took one slip
I have become
Uncomfortably Numb
Well I like it and this was two years ago? wow it seems that youve been an awesome writer like forever! I dont write much because to me its like personal stuff that I dont want any body in my house looking at lol Cause its from my heart and pretty much my family thinks im a happy jolly person who talks alot. I mean im not happy all the time but I do talk alot. See im doing it right now. =)
GreenDayMnority, August 7th, 2010 at 01:53:51pm
I think Pink Floyd inspired some of this, lol.
I'm not trying to be rude but you might want to have someone proofread your blogs, even me if you wanted, because there were quite a lot of spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors. On GSB, blogs are meant to be more serious meaning you need to make sure that they're a bit more presentable in that department.
Kyra, August 7th, 2010 at 01:59:49am