Fairies’ kisses and Angeles’ feathers can’t stop insanity

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Mibba
April 28th, 2006 at 05:06pm
Fairies’ kisses and Angeles’ feathers can’t stop insanity

Fairy kisses upon a tired mind
Helped chasing away the goblins.
At least for a little while.
Because shadows always lurk in the corners
And they are getting less and less intimidated by light.
Creeping further into her conscious.
Creating everlasting night.

Angel feathers creased her soul
In effort to mend broken emotions.
But the scares are permanent.
Demons disguised as memories roam freely,
Unimpeded they sweep through every soiled dream.
Contaminating each trace of hope.
It is coming apart at the seam.

The wove of sanity is growing thin
As obscure silhouettes increases.
Shadows within rise to overcome
All the tenderness ever given.

While the delicate structure is falling apart
The mirrors of the soul shine brightly.
Don’t be fooled, my dear.
It is only the last light escaping
The raid of the final, grim night.
Inari
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April 28th, 2006 at 05:46pm
Loooove it.
Love it love it love it.
snowcherry
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April 28th, 2006 at 07:09pm
Aww... it's beautiful.
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Mibba
April 29th, 2006 at 03:26pm
*happy smile* Thank you, my poetic fairies. Kiss
Peter Petrelli
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April 29th, 2006 at 03:28pm
I LOVE IT!!!11 *caps abuse over*

Awwwwwhhhh... you're getting too good at this.
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Mibba
May 1st, 2006 at 10:40am
Thank you, sweetie. Hug

Really? I’m not even close to you guys though.
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Mibba
May 1st, 2006 at 11:30am
That's great. =]
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May 1st, 2006 at 01:36pm
it\s very pretty..i love it...no, i REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE IT.
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Mibba
May 1st, 2006 at 02:14pm
Thank you so much! ^_^
Babi Kid Rachy
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May 1st, 2006 at 02:34pm
Could your poems get anybetter!!! Surprised Surprised Surprised

THAT IS GOOD! <3
As usual. Very Happy
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Mibba
May 2nd, 2006 at 01:00pm
I sure hope so. Wink

Thanks ^_^
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May 2nd, 2006 at 08:39pm
good! Smile
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May 2nd, 2006 at 09:09pm
I thought it was really good! I like the flow. I am sorry that I haven't had alot of my work up lately, I'm hoping to have alot more soon. I'll post a song I wrote tonight, please check it out and give any constructive critisism you can.
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Mibba
May 3rd, 2006 at 03:42pm
A bunch of thanks =]
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Mibba
May 4th, 2006 at 01:01pm
greendaypunksliveforever:
I thought it was really good! I like the flow. I am sorry that I haven't had alot of my work up lately, I'm hoping to have alot more soon. I'll post a song I wrote tonight, please check it out and give any constructive critisism you can.

I did check it out. Smile I’ll keep a lookout for your poems/songs.
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Mibba
June 21st, 2006 at 10:58pm
I like it. You're good with words. ^_^
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June 22nd, 2006 at 02:45am
Hmmm...well, it sucks...hah! Just kidding. Everybody said everything, I could ever say so I had to say something different. It rules! Just like all of your poems. Cool
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June 22nd, 2006 at 04:10am
I really like the way you write poems!
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Mibba
June 22nd, 2006 at 08:53am
I think this is an old one. Don’t revive old poems, kids Wink
Anyway, a big thank you to all of you guys. You’re so sweet. Hug

Tylar: lol, you almost fooled me there! But thanks =]
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Mibba
June 22nd, 2006 at 09:47am
It like it a lot. It has fantastic flow, and great word choice.

Yay for your poem. Very Happy
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