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What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| April 28th, 2006 at 05:06pm Fairies’ kisses and Angeles’ feathers can’t stop insanity
Fairy kisses upon a tired mind
Helped chasing away the goblins.
At least for a little while.
Because shadows always lurk in the corners
And they are getting less and less intimidated by light.
Creeping further into her conscious.
Creating everlasting night.
Angel feathers creased her soul
In effort to mend broken emotions.
But the scares are permanent.
Demons disguised as memories roam freely,
Unimpeded they sweep through every soiled dream.
Contaminating each trace of hope.
It is coming apart at the seam.
The wove of sanity is growing thin
As obscure silhouettes increases.
Shadows within rise to overcome
All the tenderness ever given.
While the delicate structure is falling apart
The mirrors of the soul shine brightly.
Don’t be fooled, my dear.
It is only the last light escaping
The raid of the final, grim night. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | April 28th, 2006 at 05:46pm Loooove it.
Love it love it love it. |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | April 28th, 2006 at 07:09pm Aww... it's beautiful. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| April 29th, 2006 at 03:26pm *happy smile* Thank you, my poetic fairies.  |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | April 29th, 2006 at 03:28pm I LOVE IT!!!11 *caps abuse over*
Awwwwwhhhh... you're getting too good at this. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| Thank you, sweetie.
Really? I’m not even close to you guys though. |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| That's great. =] |
killing loneliness Idiot
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 572 | it\s very pretty..i love it...no, i REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE IT. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| Thank you so much! ^_^ |
Babi Kid Rachy King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 4512 | Could your poems get anybetter!!!
THAT IS GOOD! <3
As usual.  |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| I sure hope so.
Thanks ^_^ |
love. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2844 | good!  |
greendaypunksliveforever Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 58 | I thought it was really good! I like the flow. I am sorry that I haven't had alot of my work up lately, I'm hoping to have alot more soon. I'll post a song I wrote tonight, please check it out and give any constructive critisism you can. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| A bunch of thanks =] |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| greendaypunksliveforever:I thought it was really good! I like the flow. I am sorry that I haven't had alot of my work up lately, I'm hoping to have alot more soon. I'll post a song I wrote tonight, please check it out and give any constructive critisism you can.
I did check it out.  I’ll keep a lookout for your poems/songs. |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK! Jackass
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1019
| June 21st, 2006 at 10:58pm I like it. You're good with words. ^_^ |
josh_oliday23 Geek
 Age: 35 Gender: Male Posts: 267 | June 22nd, 2006 at 02:45am Hmmm...well, it sucks...hah! Just kidding. Everybody said everything, I could ever say so I had to say something different. It rules! Just like all of your poems.  |
Meski Addict
 Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856
 | June 22nd, 2006 at 04:10am I really like the way you write poems! |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| June 22nd, 2006 at 08:53am I think this is an old one. Don’t revive old poems, kids 
Anyway, a big thank you to all of you guys. You’re so sweet.
Tylar: lol, you almost fooled me there! But thanks =] |
Ol' Blue Eyes. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 4816
| June 22nd, 2006 at 09:47am It like it a lot. It has fantastic flow, and great word choice.
Yay for your poem.  |