Socially Awkward In Her Destroyed Identity…Diagnosed

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Eliana Rampage
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May 7th, 2006 at 08:13pm
So I think this is the best I've done in a while...yeah it's about me. XD I kinda had a stressful day...After 2 years of giving in to a condescending "friend" whom actually is a bitch, I stood up on behalf of me and my friends...I had a fight with a few people...this is me reflecting off of it, along with a few other things. Enjoy!

Socially Awkward In Her Destroyed Identity…Diagnosed

Social antiquities impeach her weary presence;
Foreboding spacial atmospheres encasing her persona;
She is a showcase, all she is forced to express,
to represent,
individuality inclined eternally.
A devastation, ironic tragedy
implied from the “death glares” sought
from her gloomy eyes of apprehension.

Oh, she is always blamed for curiosity,
her intricate ideology persistently contradicted.
Common courtesy is allegedly missing,
erased from her beliefs…
Ailments of a bitter tasting amnesia,
an accusation for her “treacherous murder”;
with these chains, studs, spikes of compulsive behavior.

She’s a rebel, that girl…adolescence will take her nowhere but the streets…

But that is where she longs to be.
Away from the warm comforting homes,
the fluorescent lights flickering in their vague hues.
Away from the conformal sanity,
into the arms of understanding embrace,
thus marking the end to her pitiless disaster.

A home that was never her true dimension,
where the colors are blinding,
a conclusion to deviant sunsets.
Clad in black, but yet a faerie in her own passion;
It was a bygone conclusion she was a guardian angel,
regardless of the ominous blue streaks
cascading through her brown hair;
The single coveted fortress she permits herself to hide within;
Camouflage; a disguise;
She seems okay, but the occasional tear drifts solemnly away…
Forgotten.

Who would ever care for a little fallen angel?
Fallen angels…so cliché…
But in her own essence, of course.
She never bore wings, she scarcely could be divine.
But her mind was cremated; abolished;
A masterpiece left behind.
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May 7th, 2006 at 08:34pm
I actually like it alot. I liked this bit


But that is where she longs to be.
Away from the warm comforting homes,
the fluorescent lights flickering in their vague hues.
Away from the conformal sanity,
into the arms of understanding embrace,
thus marking the end to her pitiless disaster.
Eliana Rampage
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May 7th, 2006 at 10:24pm
Thanks ^^
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May 7th, 2006 at 10:37pm
It's UBERLICIOUS! Cool

Yeah, that's right. I used big font. I'm SO dangerous. Cool
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May 8th, 2006 at 12:15am
That was beautiful, as always.

But that is where she longs to be.
Away from the warm comforting homes,
the fluorescent lights flickering in their vague hues.
Away from the conformal sanity,
into the arms of understanding embrace,
thus marking the end to her pitiless disaster.
^That part kinda described me o__o
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May 8th, 2006 at 03:47am
I don't know how you do it......speechless...AGAIN!
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May 8th, 2006 at 03:48am
Beautiful. <3
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May 8th, 2006 at 05:10am
Loved it.
I love all your work.
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May 8th, 2006 at 06:43am
<3 I love all of YOU. Very Happy
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May 8th, 2006 at 06:45am
Love, love, LOVE it. You're too talented.
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May 8th, 2006 at 06:59am
Aww Very Happy Really? Kiss
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May 8th, 2006 at 07:06am
GZA GZA

Beautiful beyond belief. <2+1
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May 8th, 2006 at 09:39am
<3 Thank you Lisa! Very Happy
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May 8th, 2006 at 10:48am
I love it... *drools*

'A home that was never her true dimension,
where the colors are blinding,
a conclusion to deviant sunsets.
Clad in black, but yet a faerie in her own passion;
It was a bygone conclusion she was a guardian angel,
regardless of the ominous blue streaks
cascading through her brown hair'
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May 8th, 2006 at 10:48am
xD Yay! Thankies dear *huggles*
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May 8th, 2006 at 11:50am
That is awesome, more than awesome...Brilliant!
I love your poems.
<3
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May 8th, 2006 at 01:34pm
Gah... Beautiful, as usual. Cool
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May 8th, 2006 at 03:51pm
YesYesYesYesYes.

I love it.

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May 8th, 2006 at 03:59pm
<3 I love you guys ^_^
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May 8th, 2006 at 04:26pm
OH EM GEE I love that SO much that I would jump off a cliff after it if it so happened to fall off of one. Of course, after that I would suddenly sprout giant purple butterfly panda wings and fly across the ocean with the poem clutched in my mouth. Then I would land in like Wales randomly and go swim in a river. XDDD

Just admit it. I'm too cool for you. Cool
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