Paper Cuts Across Those Crimson Eyes

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Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	May 8th, 2006 at 08:52pm Er so...the name comes from the fact a paper literally sliced across my eye the other day, and yes it hurt like hell. XD The actual context is about something else...Enjoy! Paper Cuts Across Those Crimson Eyes Heartfelt disdain, smothering its virus across the infectious wounds of another lost kiss. The iambic beats, patterns of a tattered heart. Spreading forever across the lacerated skin of an impaled deity. Slowly, a passionate decomposition as the stars flicker… in and out of a glowing climax. Dare to inhale the diminishing night? Spores of intoxicated pessimism just may mutate to be viral. A parasite, sickly epidemics spread like dancing infernos; Otherwise, a lover’s burning eyes, issuing their admonished grace upon crystal lights. The bronze and silver moths register mysterious and unexpected beauty, wings in their flight fluctuate a prism of color; Yet the rainbows of brilliance are ignored in their presence, The dusty shadows, waltzing hues, trampled in desolate shimmers… Elusive divinities, harmonious illusions survive within ourselves… Enabling us to breathe, to live… To administer the quarantine to this broken symphony, its piercing cries cut straight across our emotions, blowing the wind out of the darkest of tempests. For even the slightest movement can cause the most painful abrasion… Can’t you see her crimson eyes were sliced by your paper cuts?
Zoie Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 6370	May 8th, 2006 at 08:58pm That's awsome..I'm running out of things to say about your poems...like words can't express how good they are anymore...
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 8th, 2006 at 09:02pm snogs the poem Yeah, that's right. Whatchya gon' do about it?
Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	May 8th, 2006 at 09:02pm Pssh! You pwn Zoe I think everyone here is better than me though XD
davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018	May 8th, 2006 at 09:15pm Oh my...I am in a daze. dribbles
xXx depressed_emo xXx Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 186	May 9th, 2006 at 04:17am u kick ass dude
clark GSBitch Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 79047	May 9th, 2006 at 04:24am ILY <3
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 9th, 2006 at 05:04am Awwwwwwwww. Amazing. Awesome. A lot more things beginning with A, because it gets an A* from me, sweetheart
Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	May 9th, 2006 at 06:43am <2+1 Thanks so much guys ^___^
FrankFuckingIero Jackass Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 1015	May 9th, 2006 at 06:48am I don't know how to describe it so I'm just gonna say: WOW
Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	May 9th, 2006 at 07:10am Awws. ^_^ Thanks a lot!
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 9th, 2006 at 08:47am You know what I think.
Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	May 9th, 2006 at 09:20am ;D Thanks dear!
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 9th, 2006 at 09:55am I need to find more compliments. Really.
skittelzster Geek Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 266	May 9th, 2006 at 01:30pm Yeah really good keep writing!
Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	May 9th, 2006 at 02:09pm I'll keep writing, thanks guys XD
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	May 9th, 2006 at 03:53pm XxBillieOwnsXx: <2+1 Thanks so much guys ^___^ xDD <3
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	May 9th, 2006 at 05:39pm The title reminded me of Jackass and Linkin Park. I love it.
paper shoes This Board Is My Home Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 34269	May 9th, 2006 at 05:47pm So it's trendy now to over-use complicated words. Mkay.
Eliana Rampage Jackass Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1958	May 9th, 2006 at 05:50pm o.o Excuse me? Should I take that as an insult? I'm sorry if my vocabulary is an offense to you, but I don't think anyone appreciates your mediocre statements.

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