Paper Cuts Across Those Crimson Eyes

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Eliana Rampage
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May 8th, 2006 at 08:52pm
Er so...the name comes from the fact a paper literally sliced across my eye the other day, and yes it hurt like hell. XD The actual context is about something else...Enjoy!

Paper Cuts Across Those Crimson Eyes

Heartfelt disdain,
smothering its virus across the infectious wounds
of another lost kiss.
The iambic beats, patterns of a tattered heart.
Spreading forever across the lacerated skin of an impaled deity.
Slowly,
a passionate decomposition as the stars flicker…
in and out of a glowing climax.

Dare to inhale the diminishing night?
Spores of intoxicated pessimism just may mutate to be viral.

A parasite, sickly epidemics spread like
dancing infernos;
Otherwise, a lover’s burning eyes,
issuing their admonished grace upon crystal lights.


The bronze and silver moths register
mysterious and unexpected beauty,
wings in their flight fluctuate a prism of color;
Yet the rainbows of brilliance are ignored in their presence,
The dusty shadows, waltzing hues,
trampled in desolate shimmers…

Elusive divinities, harmonious illusions survive within ourselves…
Enabling us to breathe, to live…
To administer the quarantine to this broken symphony,
its piercing cries cut straight across our emotions,
blowing the wind out of the darkest of tempests.

For even the slightest movement can cause the most painful abrasion…
Can’t you see her crimson eyes were sliced by your paper cuts?
Zoie
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May 8th, 2006 at 08:58pm
That's awsome..I'm running out of things to say about your poems...like words can't express how good they are anymore...
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Mibba
May 8th, 2006 at 09:02pm
*snogs the poem* Cool Yeah, that's right. Whatchya gon' do about it?
Eliana Rampage
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May 8th, 2006 at 09:02pm
Pssh! You pwn Zoe Very Happy I think everyone here is better than me though XD
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May 8th, 2006 at 09:15pm
Surprised

Oh my...I am in a daze. *dribbles*
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May 9th, 2006 at 04:17am
u kick ass dude
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May 9th, 2006 at 04:24am
ILY <3

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May 9th, 2006 at 05:04am
Awwwwwwwww. Amazing. Awesome. A lot more things beginning with A, because it gets an A* from me, sweetheart Retard
Eliana Rampage
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May 9th, 2006 at 06:43am
<2+1

Thanks so much guys ^___^
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May 9th, 2006 at 06:48am
I don't know how to describe it so I'm just gonna say: WOW
Eliana Rampage
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May 9th, 2006 at 07:10am
Awws. ^_^ Thanks a lot!
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May 9th, 2006 at 08:47am
You know what I think.
Kiss
Eliana Rampage
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May 9th, 2006 at 09:20am
Kiss

;D Thanks dear!
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May 9th, 2006 at 09:55am
I need to find more compliments.
Really. Wink
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May 9th, 2006 at 01:30pm
Yeah really good keep writing!
Eliana Rampage
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May 9th, 2006 at 02:09pm
I'll keep writing, thanks guys XD
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May 9th, 2006 at 03:53pm
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<2+1

Thanks so much guys ^___^
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xDD

<3
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Mibba
May 9th, 2006 at 05:39pm
The title reminded me of Jackass and Linkin Park.

I love it. Up
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May 9th, 2006 at 05:47pm
So it's trendy now to over-use complicated words.
Mkay.
Eliana Rampage
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May 9th, 2006 at 05:50pm
o.o Excuse me?

Should I take that as an insult?

I'm sorry if my vocabulary is an offense to you, but I don't think anyone appreciates your mediocre statements.
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