:)

I loved you when I saw you
when I heard you even more
what dream is this I wondered
In a daze I was caught
by your display

So wonderous you are still
with your jokes
I think I see you are you
despite what has happened
over time

Your soul is a good one
I see it through and through
it makes me want to be
around you

I do not seek to change one bit
of who you've come to be
because even as you've grown
I have loved you eternally

Awww.
That's incredibly sweet.

awwwww
how cute

This is the kind of poems you should have posted all along!
This one is sweet. And, more importantly, understandable.
There are still many things you can improve though, so keep writing.

Thank you. I was thinking about Billie Joe when I wrote it. I hope he appreciates the poem if he reads it.

imtwasidwelya:

Thank you. I was thinking about Billie Joe when I wrote it. I hope he appreciates the poem if he reads it.

Don't TELL US THAT xD.
It was really sweet though <3

That's cute.

What's in a name?:

This is the kind of poems you should have posted all along!
This one is sweet. And, more importantly, understandable.
There are still many things you can improve though, so keep writing.

don't listen to people who tell you poetry that is easier to understand is better; if you have a talent at metaphors or symbolism use it

I like it!
Its sweet

spill_no_sick:

What's in a name?:

This is the kind of poems you should have posted all along!
This one is sweet. And, more importantly, understandable.
There are still many things you can improve though, so keep writing.

don't listen to people who tell you poetry that is easier to understand is better; if you have a talent at metaphors or symbolism use it

I agree.

Aww...so flippin' cute!

spill_no_sick:

What's in a name?:

This is the kind of poems you should have posted all along!
This one is sweet. And, more importantly, understandable.
There are still many things you can improve though, so keep writing.

don't listen to people who tell you poetry that is easier to understand is better; if you have a talent at metaphors or symbolism use it

Thank you. I have had so much "constructive criticism" lately, I figured I'd better throw in a "lengthy" one that did not have "metaphors or symbolism" in it.

Annie Victim:

imtwasidwelya:

Thank you. I was thinking about Billie Joe when I wrote it. I hope he appreciates the poem if he reads it.

Don't TELL US THAT xD.
It was really sweet though <3

spill_no_sick:

What's in a name?:

This is the kind of poems you should have posted all along!
This one is sweet. And, more importantly, understandable.
There are still many things you can improve though, so keep writing.

don't listen to people who tell you poetry that is easier to understand is better; if you have a talent at metaphors or symbolism use it

Dumbass! I wasn't telling her to write simple poetry! I was telling her to write poetry that makes at least some kinda sense.
If no one can understand it, it is pointless.