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snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 17th, 2006 at 01:44pm
As her chest is heaving it feels
As if her ribs are cracking
Breaking
Scattering biting slivers all over her lungs
Cutting into her heart
Littering her air
It's the sudden contraction
Causing her to squirm
It's hurting way too much
It's impossible to respire
To breathe
Just breathe in, angel
Coughs dry as summer's gale
Thundering through her
Drawing every last dew drop of wind
She crawls
She cries
Over harsh withdrawal symptons
Slipping through
Beneath the vitreous landslides
Ghostly hands running over her face
Catching a faerie's sigh in her throat
Just breathe in, angel
She gasps in surprise
As the faerie's sigh's melting the slivers |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 17th, 2006 at 01:48pm Thanchoo.  |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | May 17th, 2006 at 01:55pm That is too beautiful for words. |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 17th, 2006 at 02:02pm Inari:That is too beautiful for words.
Exaggeration.
But thank you, darling.  |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | May 17th, 2006 at 02:08pm snowcherry:
Exaggeration.
But thank you, darling. 
Psh.
No way exaggeration. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | May 17th, 2006 at 02:15pm It's fricking amazing. I honestly can't express it in words, it's just too beautiful. |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 17th, 2006 at 02:20pm *blinks a bit in surprise*
Thank you, sweetie.  |
rollerpig GSBitch
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | May 17th, 2006 at 02:32pm My mouth = TOTALLY OPEN. :O
That was beautiful. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 17th, 2006 at 02:33pm I love that poem indescribably much! It felt so alive so real,
and not just like words typed up on the screen. Incredible. Just incredible. |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 17th, 2006 at 02:38pm TreCoolistsogeil:My mouth = TOTALLY OPEN. :O
That was beautiful.
Thanchoo, Be.  |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 17th, 2006 at 02:38pm What's in a name?:I love that poem indescribably much! It felt so alive so real,
and not just like words typed up on the screen. Incredible. Just incredible.
Thank you! |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 17th, 2006 at 02:59pm snowcherry:What's in a name?:I love that poem indescribably much! It felt so alive so real,
and not just like words typed up on the screen. Incredible. Just incredible.
Thank you!
You're more than welcome.
You’re worth all the praises in the world, dear. |
Alexa. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 5253 | May 17th, 2006 at 03:01pm Absolutely wonderful, I really really liked it  |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| May 17th, 2006 at 03:03pm That was pretty sweet, if I do say so myself. XD
I love it.  |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 18th, 2006 at 08:30am Thanchooooo.
I honestly thought about throwing this away,
but then I decided it can't hurt to post it to see
what you guys think. |
love. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2844 | May 18th, 2006 at 10:13pm this is amazing. i love it  . |
Brendon Urie.. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2394
| May 19th, 2006 at 10:43am That was ... breath-taking.
There are no words. |
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | May 19th, 2006 at 01:15pm Amazing beyond belief!
As her chest is heaving it feels
As if her ribs are cracking
Breaking
Scattering biting slivers all over her lungs
Cutting into her heart
Littering her air
It's the sudden contraction
Causing her to squirm
It's hurting way too much
It's impossible to respire
To breathe
Just breathe in, angel
I loved those two stanzas! <2+1 |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 19th, 2006 at 01:26pm Wow... people are still commenting on this!
Thanks so much, guys!  |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 19th, 2006 at 02:34pm snowcherry:Wow... people are still commenting on this!
Thanks so much, guys! 
Off course! It rocks more than anything.  |