Breathing Curse

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snowcherry
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May 17th, 2006 at 01:44pm
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As her chest is heaving it feels
As if her ribs are cracking
Breaking
Scattering biting slivers all over her lungs
Cutting into her heart
Littering her air

It's the sudden contraction
Causing her to squirm
It's hurting way too much
It's impossible to respire
To breathe
Just breathe in, angel

Coughs dry as summer's gale
Thundering through her
Drawing every last dew drop of wind
She crawls
She cries
Over harsh withdrawal symptons

Slipping through
Beneath the vitreous landslides
Ghostly hands running over her face
Catching a faerie's sigh in her throat
Just breathe in, angel
She gasps in surprise
As the faerie's sigh's melting the slivers
snowcherry
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May 17th, 2006 at 01:48pm
Thanchoo. Smile
Inari
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May 17th, 2006 at 01:55pm
That is too beautiful for words.
snowcherry
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May 17th, 2006 at 02:02pm
Inari:
That is too beautiful for words.



Exaggeration. Wink



But thank you, darling. Kiss
Inari
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May 17th, 2006 at 02:08pm
snowcherry:

Exaggeration. Wink



But thank you, darling. Kiss


Psh.
No way exaggeration.
Peter Petrelli
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May 17th, 2006 at 02:15pm
It's fricking amazing. I honestly can't express it in words, it's just too beautiful.
snowcherry
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May 17th, 2006 at 02:20pm
*blinks a bit in surprise*

Thank you, sweetie. Smile
rollerpig
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May 17th, 2006 at 02:32pm
My mouth = TOTALLY OPEN. :O

That was beautiful.
What's in a name?
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Mibba
May 17th, 2006 at 02:33pm
I love that poem indescribably much! It felt so alive so real,
and not just like words typed up on the screen. Incredible. Just incredible.
snowcherry
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May 17th, 2006 at 02:38pm
TreCoolistsogeil:
My mouth = TOTALLY OPEN. :O

That was beautiful.



Thanchoo, Be. Wink
snowcherry
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May 17th, 2006 at 02:38pm
What's in a name?:
I love that poem indescribably much! It felt so alive so real,
and not just like words typed up on the screen. Incredible. Just incredible.



Shocked

Thank you!
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Mibba
May 17th, 2006 at 02:59pm
snowcherry:
What's in a name?:
I love that poem indescribably much! It felt so alive so real,
and not just like words typed up on the screen. Incredible. Just incredible.



Shocked

Thank you!

You're more than welcome.
You’re worth all the praises in the world, dear.
Alexa.
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May 17th, 2006 at 03:01pm
Absolutely wonderful, I really really liked it Cool
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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Mibba
May 17th, 2006 at 03:03pm
That was pretty sweet, if I do say so myself. XD

I love it. Cool
snowcherry
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May 18th, 2006 at 08:30am
Thanchooooo. Very Happy




I honestly thought about throwing this away,
but then I decided it can't hurt to post it to see
what you guys think.
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
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May 18th, 2006 at 10:13pm
this is amazing. i love itSmile.
Brendon Urie..
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Mibba
May 19th, 2006 at 10:43am
That was ... breath-taking.

There are no words.
It Had to Be You.
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May 19th, 2006 at 01:15pm
Amazing beyond belief! Shocked

As her chest is heaving it feels
As if her ribs are cracking
Breaking
Scattering biting slivers all over her lungs
Cutting into her heart
Littering her air

It's the sudden contraction
Causing her to squirm
It's hurting way too much
It's impossible to respire
To breathe
Just breathe in, angel


I loved those two stanzas! <2+1
snowcherry
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May 19th, 2006 at 01:26pm
Wow... people are still commenting on this! Shocked


Thanks so much, guys! Kiss
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Mibba
May 19th, 2006 at 02:34pm
snowcherry:
Wow... people are still commenting on this! Shocked


Thanks so much, guys! Kiss

Off course! It rocks more than anything. Cool
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