Daily Meds and Candid Kisses

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Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 20th, 2006 at 08:04am It's a little shaky, because I've never explored love in this way before. I'm just finding my feet Angel kisses, medicine affections, and shotgun romance; the tarnished pages of teenage embrace and bed sheet chrysalis. They have more than youth on their side. Genuine passion and sweetheart rhythms paint a more lucid picture than vanity coma and lipstick watercolours. It takes strong hearts to relieve parental protection, and break down congested nightmares. Whispered words; breathing in the faint seduction of tattoo ink. Eighteen is such a tender age to rise up to, and softly stitch with patchwork identities and candid kisses. Sometimes it's the thrill of the mystery, suspense, and danger that makes it all the more satisfying. Even angels have to prove their maturity and bear their sensitive souls. It's always been the weak, sickly sweethearts that become overshadowed by violation of privacy; labelled with the same stereotypes as their stronger, extrovert counterparts. Together, they form a cocktail of quiet academics, daily meds, and debating intellect. It's never been about the lust or giving in to fatal attractions.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 20th, 2006 at 09:35am Yup, a little shaky. nods But still awesome.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 20th, 2006 at 09:44am It's beautiful. As is everything you write, my dear.
Ol' Blue Eyes. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4816	May 20th, 2006 at 10:29am snowcherry: It's beautiful. As is everything you write, my dear. agrees
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 20th, 2006 at 10:39am Awwww, thank you guys. I might re-draft this sometime, and see if I can improve it at all
11th Street Kid King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3645	May 20th, 2006 at 12:28pm That was really good... totally beautiful. Great ending too. Genuine passion and sweetheart rhythms paint a more lucid picture than vanity coma and lipstick watercolours. That bit was just... awesome.
Misanthropist Post Whore Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 23279	May 20th, 2006 at 12:38pm I really, really liked it. My favourite bit was: It takes strong hearts to relieve parental protection, and break down congested nightmares. Whispered words; breathing in the faint seduction of tattoo ink. Eighteen is such a tender age to rise up to, and softly stitch with patchwork identities and candid kisses. Sometimes it's the thrill of the mystery, suspense, and danger that makes it all the more satisfying. But it was all really good.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 20th, 2006 at 12:41pm I've run out of compliments. You've bled me dry, my beautiful little muffin. You know I love it.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 21st, 2006 at 04:55am I wasn't so sure about this one, but you've really cheered me up
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	May 21st, 2006 at 05:20am OH SNAP. Fucking beautiful.
Kid_Gates Geek Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 289	May 21st, 2006 at 05:25am nice
Line & Sinker Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 638	May 21st, 2006 at 09:19am you make words cool :]
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 49206	May 21st, 2006 at 12:50pm Fantastic! I loved it.
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225	May 21st, 2006 at 03:27pm beautiful!!!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 21st, 2006 at 08:18pm =O I love it. XD d00d, you know my comment was sooo exciting. I think I almost passed out, myself. ;]

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