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| Author | Message |
|---|---|
| ladyramone Post Whore  Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 21701 | |
| Meski Addict Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 14856  | |
| Miley Cyrus Basket Case  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 15185 | Wow, great  The only thing is, the last line seems a bit too short. The flow is really nice until there. Good job  |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451  | sheepless and redundant: Yes it does, doesn't it? I thought it was just me at first.  |
| newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 42495 | What's in a name?: Actually, I know. I did it on purpose. So it would appear sharply cut off. But criticism appreciated, mate. |
| Megan. Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: - Posts: 6962 | |
| newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 42495 | |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | Ella: Yeah, I was thinking it was intentionally because you’re too great to make such a mistake.  I guess it’s all good then. It did seem sharply cut off so it worked. |
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