I fought the lawn.
Idiot
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 929 | June 9th, 2006 at 06:42pm I know it dosen't rhyme so foo.
I hope you're happy now
You made me cry
You made me bleed
You left me on the side of the road
Lonely and cold
Lost and forgotten
I wait for you to come back to me
But you never showed up
Why?
Is it because you hate me?
You told me words
You told me you loved me
Like a lost soul in an ocean of sadness
I float and hope I drown
Soon I will doe of secrets and of lies
You sid you cared
I knew you didn't
Because if you did, I wouldn't be here
With this blade to my wrist
Now I shall die
Of this mistaken lie
And when I'm dead
I will dream of how you should die
I hope you're happy now
You killed me
But I know you really didn't care
Even if you said it
You didn't mean it
The blade is no longer to my wrist, it is to my chin
Waiting to draw blood
Love is a powerful feeling
It can lead a girl to her death
I've done what had to be done
You're better off without me anyway
I only wanted you to love me
But it's too late now |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | June 9th, 2006 at 06:59pm It's okay. People tend to be having a problem with originality these days. Poems about this subject matter are very rarely unique. I would really advise to try writing about something else. |
Tre Cool's Lady Marmalade
Board Parasite
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 39845 | June 9th, 2006 at 07:01pm i think its good =] |
D-A-N-I
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 885 | June 9th, 2006 at 07:03pm nice!  |
tAcOs!-Jay
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 83 | June 9th, 2006 at 07:07pm its good but u shouldnt cut or anything over a boy i mean so immature if u need the guys pity cuss him out or something dont refer to this kind of shit well its a poem n e ways so..yeah its good  |
D-A-N-I
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 885 | June 9th, 2006 at 07:08pm ditto |
I fought the lawn.
Idiot
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 929 | June 9th, 2006 at 07:09pm gothchick13:its good but u shouldnt cut or anything over a boy i mean so immature if u need the guys pity cuss him out or something dont refer to this kind of shit well its a poem n e ways so..yeah its good
POEM.
That's not really what it was about... |
Ol' Blue Eyes.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 4816
| June 9th, 2006 at 07:41pm Hardcore Panda!!1:It's okay. People tend to be having a problem with originality these days. Poems about this subject matter are very rarely unique. I would really advise to try writing about something else.
Agreed. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| June 9th, 2006 at 07:43pm Rhyming isn't everything.... |
Dehren McGhengland
Rotting On Here
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 49206 | June 9th, 2006 at 07:43pm we_found_the_duck:Hardcore Panda!!1:It's okay. People tend to be having a problem with originality these days. Poems about this subject matter are very rarely unique. I would really advise to try writing about something else.
Agreed. |
