It Wasn't

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lyrical_mess
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June 12th, 2006 at 01:04pm
Yes, this is a post promoting my story. If you've read it, and you like it, please post here. I just want to get some people to read it. This is Cinder24/Rhiana's idea. Therefore, she rocks balls.

It Wasn't, despite what it seems, is a Billie Joe/Adrienne story. But at the same time, its also a Tre/Made up character named Robyn story.

Robyn is awesome. The story starts out with a girl named Alice. She's a huge Green Day fan. One day, she's at a concert. Luckily, she also has an invitation to the after-concert party. She meets Adrienne there and talks to Tre and Mike. She also sees her ex, Ryan. She tries to hide behind someone, and ten minutes later, realizes that its Billie Joe. Something happens. She freaks out about what she did and tries to run away. Billie Joe goes out (on Adie's request) and talks to her. Something else happens. Later, Billie gives Alice his private number.

When she calls him, they go to a surprise place, and a lot is discovered. From there on, the story develops. So does a relationship. The story actually has most of its base from a poem I wrote called "The Thin Line". Its in my journal if you want to know more.

Hope you read!
lyrical_mess
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Mibba Blog
June 12th, 2006 at 01:56pm
Oh come on! Jesus, people! Help a girl out...at least make me feel better.


Fine! Be that way...
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June 12th, 2006 at 02:37pm
You waited 52 minutes.

Give people time... and remember, the world doesn't revolve around your thread Wink
lyrical_mess
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Mibba Blog
June 13th, 2006 at 01:17pm
heh. thankie. I know, I know. Rolling Eyes
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June 14th, 2006 at 01:39am
Yay. You started the thread.

Anyhoo, I am a big fan of this story. It is interesting and has an awesome premise which is different to most stories.

Read it people, it is good!
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Mibba Blog
June 14th, 2006 at 01:37pm
Thank you Rhi-Rhi! I will start one for Fallen too, when I get the chance!

Anyway, if any of my readers are here, chapter twelve has been submitted yesterday. I didn't get around to pming. I'll go do that now.
Riki loves Billie
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June 14th, 2006 at 02:04pm
love the story...its awesome and amzing!!!
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June 20th, 2006 at 02:36am
hey u got a thread, i just read chapter 12...i know kinda late
but is was great as usual Wink talk to u soon
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July 2nd, 2006 at 04:58am
I've been waiting a long time,
For the next chapter to come...

Very Happy
lyrical_mess
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Mibba Blog
July 2nd, 2006 at 06:25am
Don't worry. Its coming soon. And there is a very, very, very high chance that the reason for Tre's rejection will be brought out into the open. Wheeee.....
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Mibba Blog
July 6th, 2006 at 10:54am
Hi ya'll! I just submitted part 13 of the story. I'll pm people soon.

And here's a special treat for my readers! A tidbit from part 13! Aren't we happy now?

Here we go yo:

Robyn wiped her eyes, but didn’t say anything. She simply took Alice’s palm and placed her own right hand within it. Alice just stared, unable to understand what her sister was trying to tell her. Robyn lifted her hand and showed Alice her ring finger. Alice stared hard at it for moments.

What about her ring finger? There was a paper cut, a few pen stains, and a small round scar-like depression left from…

No. “Robyn Elizabeth James!” Alice shrieked, “I don’t fucking believe this. Tell me you didn’t. Tell me you signed it!”



... dun dun duhhh
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July 6th, 2006 at 09:28pm
Shocked ohh Shocked
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August 1st, 2006 at 11:17pm
Chapter 14 must be coming soon?
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August 7th, 2006 at 06:05am
Cinder24:
Chapter 14 must be coming soon?


Yes Cindy...it is! I'm almost done with it, and I apologize for being so late. I've been really caught up in Fallen and a parody story I've started with Pickle.

I think you Tre fans will be pleased with me...kinda. You won't be completely pissed off anymore. *looks hopeful*. I have a bit more to do.

Oh, and you Alice-loving readers of my story, ummm yeah. You might not like me too much for whats about to happen.
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Mibba Blog
August 12th, 2006 at 01:15pm
Chapter fourteen is posted! The story takes a darker turn. I hope you love it!

It Wasn't

Have a link! This is the beginning of the end!
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September 11th, 2006 at 09:54am
Hey, yo! I wanted to end It Wasn't with chapter fifteen, but it didn't happen. Its been up for a while, but I'm too lazy to PM anyone. Hehe. Either chapter 16 or Chapter 17 will be the last chapter. But it won't go past that, for sure. Fo' sho'. Chapter 16 won't be up for a while, so in the meantime, read Chapter Fifteen of It Wasn't and leave me a comment! Whee!

My first story is almost over...aww.
lyrical_mess
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October 11th, 2006 at 12:39pm
Sad Only like, three other people ever posted on this thread. I used to be really proud of this thing, but now I know I can do better. Especially considering that the first few chapters were based on fantasies from when I was twelve. O_o.

But it's almost over. I started chapter 16. Btw, the ending is nothing like the ending of any of the "I slept with Billie but I have a boyfriend stories"
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October 12th, 2006 at 06:25pm
i love your story!! but u havnt updated in ages!! it CANT end!! write more!!! please?
lyrical_mess
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October 13th, 2006 at 07:21am
well, that's extermely, extremely kind of you, but you obviously haven't read a lot of the better stories on here. my other stories are waaaay better than this. but thank you

anyway, i can't take the plot anywhere. but i promise, it'll go out with BANG!
lyrical_mess
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October 27th, 2006 at 10:37am
It's all over. It's finally over. Chapter sixteen has been posted and no more will be. I want to say thank you to anyone who has ever given my story a chance because encouragement really drives me. I'd love it if some other people would read the final part and give me some honest opinions.

It Wasn't and It Won't Be

Also, this story is my least favorite one. I love the plot and I love myself for thinking of it, but I didn't write it properly and I couldn't. At least it taught me the importance of prewriting. Thank you to Karina Raquel, Rhiana and Nat for reading my story and telling me to write more. Smile

I'm glad it's over so I can give more time to my other stories. Oh, and thanks to the Story Gods for inspiring me. I don't think any of you have ever read my story, but you rock balls.

Later,

Sruti.
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