Faerie Princess In Lace And Leather (Sonnet 29)

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Peter Petrelli
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June 18th, 2006 at 02:57pm
The return of the Ellen sonnet, lmao. I want to say now that I find rhyming really hard, so some of my rhymes aren't perfect... but I think they work. Very Happy

Her faerie heart has always been better
suited to heavy metal rhythms, ripped
lace, and angel sleeves. She's drenched in leather
and pretty kisses of blackened kohl; stripped
of traits held by her ancestors. Magic
princesses are never painted as soft,
introverted sweethearts. She gets so sick
on dizzy vanity; reduced to coughs
and near collapse with the stress of it all.
Faeries need guardian angels just like
anyone else. To catch her when she falls,
stroke her wings, realign her lace and spikes...
You didn't honestly expect her to
rule an entire monarchy, did you?
snowcherry
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June 18th, 2006 at 03:00pm
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Smile
rollerpig
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June 18th, 2006 at 03:03pm
It's sweet. :]
Inari
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Inari
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June 18th, 2006 at 03:58pm
Sweet and rebellious.
Just how a fantasy princess should be.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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Mibba
June 18th, 2006 at 04:01pm
Honestly, Ellen, I didn't notice any messed up rhymes. I think with the way you carry on your sentences to the next line, the rhymes don't stick out as much as they would normally. So with having that said, I absolutely loved this sonnet. You are truly the best sonnet writer I've ever seen. Love you.

<3 Panda
Peter Petrelli
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June 19th, 2006 at 08:28am
Embarassed

*huggles you all*

I love you guys Very Happy
Ol' Blue Eyes.
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Mibba
June 19th, 2006 at 09:23am
Your sonnets are amazing.
Meski
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June 19th, 2006 at 09:32am
Shocked Wow you really amazed me! I like it alot.
Peter Petrelli
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June 19th, 2006 at 02:04pm
Thank you. Again. *huggles* *again*

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Rachii!
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June 19th, 2006 at 02:10pm
That was pretty. Like rock faeries XD <333
Toxic Teeth
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June 19th, 2006 at 02:18pm
Thats Amazing!!! And Pretty!!! I like it !!!
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