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newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | June 18th, 2006 at 06:28pm For you, Nick, for being so nice and helpful. And for making me feel better about myself. AND for being a wonderful person, in general.
Ballad of Reverie
Do take my hands and bet on my devotion,
Sometimes I win yet feel like I'm losing,
And all these cards keep snickering before me,
The surprises of life stopped being amusing.
My rushing heart; vibrating down Broadway.
Perhaps it's the sidewalk it should be kissing.
My praised metaphores seem so over rated
Now that my inspiration is going missing.
You're so beautifully indifferent, unlike me;
No cautiously sewn fabric can cover my nude sin.
Someday I'll re-teach myself about dreaming.
And even when I lose, it will feel like I win. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| June 18th, 2006 at 06:35pm I loved the whole losing, winning thing. The whole poem was great; I really don't know how you do it. You've got so much talent. |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | June 18th, 2006 at 10:14pm I loved the whole idea, and you actually write shorter poems, unlike me who rants for hours. XD
Love ya!  Keep it up Ella! |
Zoie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 6370 | June 19th, 2006 at 12:12am Wow. That was amazing. I really loved the second stanza. |
La Resistance
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 82 | June 19th, 2006 at 12:17am O.O
that was....interesting. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | June 19th, 2006 at 02:22am Wow.
I absolutely loved the second and last stanza
with a passion! |
r e v e n g e
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 234 | June 19th, 2006 at 02:44am VERY good  |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | June 19th, 2006 at 08:33am I love it. You always seem to rhyme without sounding forced. You can make poetry out the simplest words. Annnd you rock, which all in all, is a pretty good combination. I loved the winning-losing idea, too.  |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | June 19th, 2006 at 09:24am I love it. |
Meski
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 14856
 | June 19th, 2006 at 09:30am I like it, yeah it's a cool poem |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | June 19th, 2006 at 12:05pm That was really really good.
Love it. |
Ol' Blue Eyes.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 4816
| June 19th, 2006 at 12:08pm The last stanza blew me away. |
beanybee
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 481 | June 19th, 2006 at 12:38pm ok, hes a poem i wrote about i guy i really liked
you might think i'm crazy, but what i say is true, when i breath the sweet brisk air, im think of u
as i sit in math class staring at the overhead, im not thinking about the problem, im thinking of u instede
as i sit oin read, galceing thu the book, my only thot is about the heart of mine you took
you mite think im crazy, but wat i say is true, when i eat and sleep and breath, my onlt thot is u |
miau
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 4469 | June 19th, 2006 at 01:49pm -gasps-  OMFGELLATHISISGOOD!! Not that I'm telling something new.  |
