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snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | June 19th, 2006 at 01:59pm It's beautifully written.
I love it. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | June 19th, 2006 at 02:00pm Huh. That's was pretty good.
By good, I actually meant 'amazing'
It had a real story behind it, I thought anyway. I loved the imagery, especially that of the title. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| June 19th, 2006 at 02:01pm But it’s too much to ask of a cold blooded murderer
^That line really stuck out. In a good way.
I love how it goes from them seeming to be in a tortured relationship to actually being meant to be together. Very nice descriptions. |
Toxic Teeth Idiot
 Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645
 | June 19th, 2006 at 02:03pm Thank You for dedicating it to me, it was lovley, no beautiful!
I love you, too!!!!!!!!!!!!
Im adding you as a friend right now!!!!!!
O and i printed it, cause i did!!!!!!!!! |
burnoutgrrl Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 8 | June 19th, 2006 at 02:05pm wow really good! i love it! well done xxx |
love. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2844 | June 19th, 2006 at 05:00pm wow. that was great. |
FeeneyKid Jackass
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 1325 | June 19th, 2006 at 05:04pm PHWOAR!!!
I had an orgy when you said Fortissimo
Italian music terms really do it for me  |
WeeHez90 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 76 | June 19th, 2006 at 05:11pm this is fuckin awesome {scuse the french} |
Ol' Blue Eyes. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 4816
| June 19th, 2006 at 06:53pm Omfg.
She seems to be cracking under the pressure
One last kiss, is all she asks of him before he lets go of sanity
But it’s too much to ask of a cold blooded murderer
AJSGKSDJG AMAZING.
Words can't describe exactly what I want to say about this poem, but Jesus.
WELL DONE, DEAR. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 20th, 2006 at 06:18am That is really really good, darling.
Your talent just keeps growing. |
clark GSBitch
 Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 79047 | June 20th, 2006 at 08:04am Wow. Just wow. |
michaeldirnt Idiot
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 737 | June 20th, 2006 at 08:12am thats sssoooooo good you should become a professianal poet person and get them published |
rollerpig GSBitch
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | June 20th, 2006 at 08:14am snowcherry:It's beautifully written.
I love it.
-nods-  |
Kid_Gates Geek
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 289 | June 20th, 2006 at 08:15am Aww! Thats awesomness! |
Ella Speed Geek
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 485 | June 20th, 2006 at 08:18am Hey! I know you! lol
It is beautefull (as allways)  |
Emily-Cool Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 6657 | June 20th, 2006 at 04:22pm I love that so so much. really good. |