JOOLS
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  | June 19th, 2006 at 03:55pm Such a lovely day
shouldn't be wasted
walking around
to the end of nowhere
But to the end of time
So you can always go
where no one has gone
Because time is endless
just like nowhere
but time
unlike nowhere
is never wasted
only spent |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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| June 19th, 2006 at 04:10pm I like that. It was short, but conceptual. |
love.
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Posts: 2844 | June 19th, 2006 at 04:52pm good.short.but good  |
WeeHez90
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 76 | June 19th, 2006 at 05:22pm i like it short and to the point hehe {okay that sounded better in my head} any way it's goood  |
The Rev
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Posts: 14004 | June 19th, 2006 at 06:55pm not bad |
Ol' Blue Eyes.
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| June 19th, 2006 at 08:25pm Short, but cute.
Because time is endless
just like nowhere
but time
unlike nowhere
is never wasted
only spent
I like this last bit. |
JOOLS
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| June 20th, 2006 at 12:10am You all make me feel special, lol!  |
Baguelle
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Posts: 2727 | June 20th, 2006 at 12:18am WeFoundTheDuck:Short, but cute.
Because time is endless
just like nowhere
but time
unlike nowhere
is never wasted
only spent
I like this last bit.
Agreed. That last part made me smile. |
DaveyHavok666
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Posts: 250 | July 7th, 2006 at 04:46pm Megatron:WeFoundTheDuck:Short, but cute.
Because time is endless
just like nowhere
but time
unlike nowhere
is never wasted
only spent
I like this last bit.
Agreed. That last part made me smile. I loved the last bit also! Some poets have trouble with their endings... but that ending was really strong! BRAVO! |
