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The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
  | June 20th, 2006 at 04:33pm Warning, this is one very disturbing poem. Eep.
These poor pitiful newborn babes
are bundled into my care.
Many won't see six.
I'm too compelled in my duty
to think of the cruel parents.
A few milligrams of morphine,
A dribble of insulin in a drip.
A few struggling moments
beneath a barrier of pillow.
I release them from their chains.
In fleeting moments of insanity,
I feel somewhat remorseful.
I ask myself in these times,
"Am I right in my actions?"
I put these empty thoughts
outside my head.
I'm saving them.
Such a sweet euthanasia,
that should have been
an earlier abortion.
I envy my patients. |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
| June 20th, 2006 at 05:15pm I like it... |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | June 20th, 2006 at 05:31pm Wow.
Disturbing yet...
I don't know.
I loved it. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| June 20th, 2006 at 05:58pm I think it's sick.
Such a sweet euthanasia,
that should have been
an earlier abortion.
Actually, I'm really interested in what inspired you to write about something like that.
Anyway, it would be a decent poem if it wasn't that subject. But whatever, I'm sure some people will dissagree. |
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786
| June 20th, 2006 at 06:50pm Ella:I think it's sick.
Such a sweet euthanasia,
that should have been
an earlier abortion.
Actually, I'm really interested in what inspired you to write about something like that.
Anyway, it would be a decent poem if it wasn't that subject. But whatever, I'm sure some people will dissagree.
I watched this docomentary on this nurse who went and killed or attepmted to kill little kids in this intensive care unit. I don't even know why I wrote it but I thought it be different to say the least and I am not giving this is as a celebration or whatever but I thought it'd be interesting to try and show something in her POV even though many, myself included, feel disgusted. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| June 20th, 2006 at 07:31pm Mmhm, that was really interesting. It's nice, though disturbing in this case, to read something different once in a while. I guess I like it. xD |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | June 21st, 2006 at 11:08am That's an awsome poem.
The subject is horrible, as we know, but the poem is great. |
Ms. Murder
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 38 | June 21st, 2006 at 02:13pm it was deep and dark, but it was only ok. |
Ol' Blue Eyes.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 4816
| June 21st, 2006 at 06:59pm Joan of Arc of Suburbia:Ella:I think it's sick.
Such a sweet euthanasia,
that should have been
an earlier abortion.
Actually, I'm really interested in what inspired you to write about something like that.
Anyway, it would be a decent poem if it wasn't that subject. But whatever, I'm sure some people will dissagree.
I watched this docomentary on this nurse who went and killed or attepmted to kill little kids in this intensive care unit. I don't even know why I wrote it but I thought it be different to say the least and I am not giving this is as a celebration or whatever but I thought it'd be interesting to try and show something in her POV even though many, myself included, feel disgusted.
It's disturbing and dark, and I just went and gave my baby cousin a hug.
But it's unique, and well written, and it was brave of you to try to put yourself in her shoes. Good job. |
