Psychological Problems Are The Bane Of Their Life

I really loved this Especially the second stanza.

Awww.
Dedicated to little old me?

I loved it.
Especially the third stanza.
That rocked my socks.

Whoawhoawhoa. Me thinks this is one of my favourites. Thank you for the dedication, especially on such an awesome poem.

Beautiful, beautiful imagery. It seemed to go well with my Radiohead music.

The lines to her head are snapped and disconnected, all systems crashing
She's gone, passed away in one satisfactory move

^Adoring these lines. Perfect ending. I love it.

I think I love the whole thing of this. I can't pick out any parts that need fixing. Well done!

Did You Miss Me?:

thank you my darling!




*adds Ellen to dedication list*

*collapses*

Oh, I love the last stanza.

Overall, it knocked the socks right off my feet.

...Which is strangely true, as I realize I just took them off around the same time I clicked this link.