Renaissance
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| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | Feel free to tear it apart, I'm really proud of this one.  Angels don't always fall from heavens above. Magic isn't always administered from vials and cauldrons. She's an angel protagonist in a sorcerer's society; adept at weaving enchantment from oaken memories and hybrid paws. A faerie princess encrusted with gooseberry green eyes and strawberry blonde hair. It's no wonder her mortal sweetheart fell head over heels in dizzy affection. Her feline aura pulses with dewdrop kisses and velvet purrs; delicate treasures which her lover ensnares with lace and stitches into heart shaped lockets. Affinity is organic, and can only be grown between fertile hearts. Their love is a faerie tale told in spell books and literature. The pages are ripped and doused in illegible calligraphy, but the parchment is still strong enough to grasp the senses. She's broken the stereotype and admires her new reflection through a pint glass; watching the auburn textures caressing the walls. Alcohol kisses craft her pretty tiara around her feline ears and angel mind. They'll sleep away the toxic headaches that come with such potions; soft flesh meeting pore to pore and sanctuary weaved from silken pillow cases. Teenage affection has never tasted so good. Pixie features complimented by darkened kohl; talisman protection hidden behind wrought iron doors. She's the odd card cocooned in the centre of a wizard's tarot deck. Who said the beautiful souls couldn't be outcasts, too? Sometimes the deviant sweethearts are able to cast the softest magic of all; coated in amniotic innocence. Love can transcend species, too. In an age of magic renaissance, the outcasts make the deepest marks... |
| Inari King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | |
| peas lover. King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 3502  | |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | OH MY OH MY OH MY GOODNESS.  No wonder you're really proud of it. It's too wonderful for words. <3 |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | Thank you guys. I guess I used angel and magic a little too many times. I personally don't have a problem with using a word twice if it's using a different image or metaphor with it. I did write this pretty quickly though, so maybe I repeated a few words. And a few of the words I used don't really have any synonyms, but I'll shut up now. |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | The same words can be used twice the way you describe. It’s just the many repetitions of a lot of words that makes it repetitive. I love the poem though, I really do.  |
| xXx depressed_emo xXx Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 186 | |
| Ol' Blue Eyes. King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 4816 | |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | Thanks everyone *huggles* |
| Jigsawess King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 2640 | You should be very, very, very proud. Thats beyond amazing. |
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