Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | July 17th, 2006 at 05:08pm "My life is spinning like a carousel stuck on repeat.
I can't see the pools of life gathered beneath my...eyes.
There's a puzzle in your expression that suggests my words
would have blended much better if I'd stumbled into rhyme,
but truth knows that I'm no fame-destined artist and
my human rights don't allow me to borrow that title.
Give the poets imagery if it'll make them smile into their pillows.
I'll settle for midnight kicks and teenage rhythms instead.
Make that another sugar in my coffee. I feel like getting high."
She filled the barstool beside me like a full moon.
Eyes like onyx and skin like ivory, she shone with temptation.
Every gaze in the room was fixated on her in lassos of lust,
but hers caressed the shape of the plastic screen in the corner.
Daily, wallflower news reports to swallow with her latté.
Caught myself wishing she wouldn't choke with all the pressure of
remembering every fact slid across the bar like a phone number.
She had such a pretty voice when it wasn't cracked with yawning.
Endearing school-girl shows of sophistication rarely last
through lunch-time rush hours but she was stressing to impress.
She's such an example of modern memorablilia with her manicured nails
that clutched to the seams of reality, scared she would rip it loose.
Her lips were working over-time when her brain had clocked off at five.
"Tear-burnt pillow cases must be a new fashion because mine
showcase moth-worn marks of misery in my insistence to fit.
Does life even have a purpose beyond seething...I mean,
breathing down bouts of nicotine-laced oxygen in shrouded bars?
Hand me another shot of caffeine, my memory is about to recover.
Reminiscing only ever sparked multiple rainclouds in my eyes.
I'm still so shallow that I can call the bottom my home and
I want to be high enough that I can catch a shooting star.
I just wish life was as simple as I pretend it is." |
Ol' Blue Eyes. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 4816
| July 17th, 2006 at 06:05pm Everything you write is so beautiful.
The second stanza was gorgeous, especially this part...
She's such an example of modern memorablilia with her manicured nails
that clutched to the seams of reality, scared she would rip it loose.
Her lips were working over-time when her brain had clocked off at five. |
Ahhhh! Jackass
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 1372 | July 17th, 2006 at 11:06pm OH. MY. GOD. That was perfect. I totally get it. OMGOMGOMGOMG 110%.
I just wish life was as simple as I pretend it is.
^I love that! i will add it to my signature okay?
Thank you for blessing my eyes with your fabulous words. |
Miss Misfit Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 265 | July 17th, 2006 at 11:08pm Ive said this before, Ill say it again...
Your an Amazing Writer.  |
[Broken Pretty] Idiot
![[Broken Pretty]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572 | July 18th, 2006 at 12:08am amazing
the last verse... wow. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | July 18th, 2006 at 06:36am Absolutely gorgeous. You just seem to creating at at top speed at the moment. But everything is just so damn good.
'Eyes like onyx and skin like ivory, she shone with temptation.' I ADORED this line so much. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | July 18th, 2006 at 07:26am Holy mother of llamas!
Thank you so much guys.
Wow!
Lol. |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:21am That is so so beautiful....
But... everything you write is so so beautiful.
I love it, but you know that.  |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| July 18th, 2006 at 11:40am  That was indeed one of my favourite poems, right there. You're on a real creative streak, aren't you?  |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | July 18th, 2006 at 12:25pm Thank you, Panda darling! |