Hotel New Archaic
Idiot
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Posts: 789 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:08am This was something... Well. I whipped up four lines of this ages ago, and I continued it this afternoon. The only person who has reviewed it so far told me it was very good... But that was an exchange student from Madrid, and I'm not entirely sure he knew what the words meant... So... Yeah..
Anyway, here t'is. And yeah, this is a song, not a poem.
Iron Factory
Fuck the cover-magazine,
fuck the mass production team,
fitting in's just not my thing,
so fuck your rules; I will be seen.
No one wants to know what you think,
shut up, sit down, have another drink.
Poisoned information, filtered half-truths,
iron factories creating the youth.
Creating the youth.
Fuck the cover-magazine,
fuck the mass production team,
fitting in's just not my thing,
so fuck your rules; I will be seen.
Do you believe everything you see,
flickering on your TV screen?
Why do you listen, why don't we learn?
Sit on the couch, just watch the world burn.
Fuck the cover-magazine,
fuck the mass production team,
fitting in's just not my thing,
so fuck your rules; I will be seen.
Stop. Think. Be.
Try to be free.
Stop. Think. See.
We've never been free.
Fuck the cover-magazine,
fuck the mass production team,
fitting in's just not my thing,
so fuck your rules; I will be seen.
Constructive critisism is most welcome, darlings. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:10am That's pretty cool. |
Hotel New Archaic
Idiot
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Gender: -
Posts: 789 | July 19th, 2006 at 04:46am Thanks. ^_^ |
stuuupid
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 8 | July 19th, 2006 at 05:05am I love it! Against Everyone and everything hehe ^_^ |
Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
 | July 19th, 2006 at 05:10am It gives off a TLE feel to me for some reason and another band im sure right now..
I like it.
Teenage angst at its best, eh? |
Hotel New Archaic
Idiot
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Posts: 789 | July 19th, 2006 at 05:12am Yeah, angstiness. ^_^ It's kind of everything that bothers me rolled into one song.
Apart from grammatical error. That'll have its own song. ^_^ |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 19th, 2006 at 05:45am the exchange student from Madrid wasnt wrong cept i understand the words and like it.  |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | July 19th, 2006 at 06:53am I stopped reading after the first stanza.
Too much swearing. Sorry. |
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
| July 19th, 2006 at 07:11am Does it actually have a melody? because until it does, its a poem... |
Hotel New Archaic
Idiot
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Gender: -
Posts: 789 | July 19th, 2006 at 08:23am Yeah. It does. Thing is, I have not, so far, been able to work out how to display a melody through typing. o.0 |
Ol' Blue Eyes.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 4816
| July 19th, 2006 at 10:51am I like that. It's very good. |
