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abc25
King For A Couple Of Days
abc25
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 2365
July 20th, 2006 at 01:56pm
We could have been together
But my love tore us apart
I wish you would stay forever
But your new relationship has start

I loved you
But we were just friends
I hated you
so now its all gone into the winds

I'll see you at the end
Our tunnel is over
my heart will never mend
I never found that four leaf clover
Ol' Blue Eyes.
King For A Couple Of Days
Ol' Blue Eyes.
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 4816

Mibba
July 20th, 2006 at 06:40pm
Parts of it sounded forced, but overall, it wasn't bad.
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