me&billiejoe*mike&
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Posts: 1333 | July 23rd, 2006 at 10:42am This one's about children who get sexually abused by parents really and it's just how people might not ever understand.
when we started out,
i never thought we'd die,
after all that i've been through,
i still try not to cry.
i feel like i am dead inside,
the outside is a fake,
another day ,
another smile,
a lonely heart for you to break.
if i love you isn't good enough,
i don't know what to say,
i can't give you flowers,
so i'll just bleed another day.
each drop i pour is not regret,
it's not either looking back,
each blade i drag across my wrist,
destroys the thought we ever met.
did i mean to be with you?
or did you something else?
you beat me every time i lied,
then you got me into bed.
i hate your fucking guts,
i hope you rot in hell,
daddy dont you understand,
that you caused all these cuts? |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 23rd, 2006 at 10:43am I actually quite liked that.
It was powerful in its own unique way. |
me&billiejoe*mike&
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Posts: 1333 | July 23rd, 2006 at 10:46am Inari:I actually quite liked that.
It was powerful in its own unique way. thanks x |
SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3369 | July 23rd, 2006 at 06:07pm It is very moving.
I like this section especially :
"when we started out,
i never thought we'd die,
after all that i've been through,
i still try not to cry.
i feel like i am dead inside,
the outside is a fake,
another day ,
another smile,
a lonely heart for you to break.
if i love you isn't good enough,
i don't know what to say,
i can't give you flowers,
so i'll just bleed another day. " |
me&billiejoe*mike&
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Posts: 1333 | July 24th, 2006 at 03:56am Jaguire13:It is very moving.
I like this section especially :
"when we started out,
i never thought we'd die,
after all that i've been through,
i still try not to cry.
i feel like i am dead inside,
the outside is a fake,
another day ,
another smile,
a lonely heart for you to break.
if i love you isn't good enough,
i don't know what to say,
i can't give you flowers,
so i'll just bleed another day. " aww thanks, it's been a really long while since i wrote so i'm getting back into it now. thanks again x |
IsabellaJade
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 81 | September 26th, 2006 at 03:58pm i love it |
Merci Pour Le Venin
Idiot
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Posts: 662 | September 26th, 2006 at 04:49pm thats powerful... |
Orgy
Geek
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Posts: 179 | September 26th, 2006 at 10:26pm Grr! >.< Love the poem, hate the subject, these kinds of poems always make me cry -tear- |
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
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Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
  | September 27th, 2006 at 07:34am That was very strong. And very true. A lot of times (from what I've read), parents do things to their children. They discourage them completely, abuse them, beat them, harrass them, and then do it more when they find out that the kid's cutting.
Hat's off to you and I'm sure that someone who reads it will feel like you wrote it just for them. |
Stark Raving Lefty.
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 634 | September 27th, 2006 at 08:17am That's really sad. In an upsetting way. |
