A Girl's Heart's Keepsakes

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snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	July 28th, 2006 at 05:21pm A gentle hand pressed against her heart Saint pulse pulsating slower when stained with sin Against flesh stained with tears Heaving dry sobs in her staggering chest As her head sinks against the glass she's facing Just one more hit and she'll be fine Her fingers clutching blurred memories Memories never gone too far astray to remember Melting slowly into lies With every time she drifts into dessert wine dreams When loving turns into threatening fear It's alright, darling, you'll be okay Broken sleep throbbing inside her head Lonely hours painting smoke upon her eyelashes Curling up into the air Fogged spirits draw shady lipstick on her lips Pressed to her souvenir of a time when she used to love Just one more time and she'll be fine
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	July 28th, 2006 at 05:25pm Wow. Kind of dark but incredibly beautiful. I love it, angel.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	July 28th, 2006 at 05:27pm Wow. I'm in awe. That's so beautifully awesome. I LOVELOVE it.
threeam. Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 350	July 28th, 2006 at 05:34pm wow.. that is freaking beautiful.
Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	July 28th, 2006 at 05:34pm Damn, you have astonished me! very good poem, I like it alot
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	July 28th, 2006 at 06:18pm Awww, thank you, guys!
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	July 28th, 2006 at 06:23pm That was so amazing, so amazing. Pressed to her souvenir of a time when she used to <333 The reast as well.
Toxic Teeth Idiot Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645	July 28th, 2006 at 06:24pm i..i..i..i...dunno were to start. that was beautiful
Love my insanity Jackass Age: 93 Gender: Female Posts: 1591	July 28th, 2006 at 06:28pm Wow. That was amazing. And I love the picture to go with it. It's caotivating. You have a great thing going for you.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	July 29th, 2006 at 06:57am I'm in love with it. I was completely captured by the title, and I'm mesmerised by the imagery. Although... was this supposed to be 'faint'? 'Saint pulse pulsating slower when stained with sin' 'Broken sleep throbbing inside her head Lonely hours painting smoke upon her eyelashes Curling up into the air Fogged spirits draw shady lipstick on her lips.' I love those lines so much.
Emily-Cool Falling In Love With The Board Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 6657	July 29th, 2006 at 07:02am thats very well written, wow. i cant get over how beautiful that is =D !
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	August 5th, 2006 at 10:59am international_idiot: I'm in love with it. I was completely captured by the title, and I'm mesmerised by the imagery. Although... was this supposed to be 'faint'? 'Saint pulse pulsating slower when stained with sin' No, it really is saint. Thank you, darling.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	August 5th, 2006 at 11:00am Thank you so so much, guys. I couldn't get on for days so that's why I'm thanking you now, but thank youuuuu.

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