SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 3369 | November 2nd, 2006 at 11:51am "I walk alone"
unwanted not loved
"I walk alone"
wishing that from above
someone would send me a friend
to whisper to
and sing with
but that has not happened
as of yet
"I walk alone"
betrayed by trust
yet I keep trusting more
-quotes from Billie Joe Armstrong
I added my own lines. |
beans
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 222 | November 2nd, 2006 at 02:27pm it's ok, i've seen better although i couldnt |
IsabellaJade
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 81 | November 2nd, 2006 at 02:45pm its good |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
  | November 2nd, 2006 at 02:46pm Its short. Its not exactly original.
I don't like it.. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | November 2nd, 2006 at 02:54pm I don't like it. A writer shouldn't have to rely on others for words that they could have easily written themselves. |
