swoon-
Post Whore
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1 000 000
 | November 12th, 2006 at 11:28pm Childhood Fantasies Never Come True
Can you hear me,
Screaming loudly?
Would you love me,
If I died?
Tell me you love me,
And what you don't see,
Were you just in it,
For the ride?
xxPrechorus
Slow down, please just slow down,
You're my personal TV while you drown
xxChorus
You can take all you want,
But don't leave me hanging
You can scream all you want,
But just so you know,
I'm not listening
xx
My eyes reflect,
Your word's effect,
Like a mirror,
On the wall.
You've come to collect,
The hopeless rejects
But you don't catch them,
As they fall
xxPrechorus
xxChorus
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I just wrote that right now. So I know it's bad and that it lacks flow. But I was bored.
And the title has nothing to do with the song. |
Miss_Minority039
Geek
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 332
| November 12th, 2006 at 11:31pm it does the job, if you spent more time on it, it would be really good |
Bearby Jones
Banned
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 63
 | November 13th, 2006 at 12:13am a LITTLE extrem, but good |
Squishy Cool
Idiot
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 614 | November 13th, 2006 at 01:02am aww i love that. it's really cool... |
Lissie!
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 7305
| November 13th, 2006 at 02:18pm It seems a little stressed?
Anyways, if you work more on it, it would be amazing. |
