Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844
 | December 26th, 2006 at 09:24pm I wanna be your lover...
Not only just your friend...
I wanna be your lover...
'Till the day the world will end..
I wanna always be with you...
I wanna make you smile...
'Cause seeing you happy with me
Makes my life worthwhile.
I wanna be lookin' in your eyes
And see you staring back
I wanna say that I love you...
But I guess...
I'll confess...
I can't.
:::
Just a drabble.
I'm in over my head right now.
Tell me what you think anyways. |
Deernt. Rotting On Here
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 48258
 | December 26th, 2006 at 11:33pm I think it's a little cliché.
It did flow a little better than I thought it would.
I also liked the lines:
I wanna always be with you...
I wanna make you smile...
'Cause seeing you happy with me
Makes my life worthwhile.
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