| Author | Message |
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MJ
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 895 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:04am Why hurt the one you say you love?
Ripping out my beating heart,
With things you say.
And when I cary your never there,
Though you said you'd catch every tear.
Sorry my friend but I can't go on,
With out a heart,
Or how shall I live?
So give it back.
It's in demand.
Give it back along with my life,
'Cause though you said,
You were never there,
And I'm off to find a life,
And a love without lies...
And there was another atempt at poetry by... MJ... lol  |
Mike's Bitch
Geek
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 461 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:07am oooooooooooh
thats good |
MJ
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 895 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:18am Thanks, I'm not that awesome with poetry. I just like to try write some because my sister got into a book at my age so I like to believe somewhere along the line I picked up her talents. |
Mike's Bitch
Geek
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 461 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:21am i cant write poetry, i try to write lyrics for songs but fail.....
the latest is:
my head feels dead
i just want to stay in bed
and be free
of the pain my mum is causing me
she's banging on my bedroom door
i get up but i fall to the floor
because my body's unco-ordinated
im disorientated
and now i give up finishing it |
MJ
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 895 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:24am lol, you shouldn't. It's got potential. All you need is inspiration. Pick up a good book or listen to some music. Turn to your radio. I know the radio sometimes plays shit but listen to it all. Sometimes the worest of songs could inspire something... and now I sound like my old english teahc er! lol |
Mike's Bitch
Geek
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 461 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:27am why thank you *grins*
i thought of that when i was waking up from the night before......
i hadnt been drinking.... i just couldnt sleep....
went to bed at 11pm..... was awake til around 2:10am......
was rudely awakened at 6:45am
it sucked...... IT WAS STILL THE HOLIDAYS!!!!!!!
i could have slept until 9am for goodness sake mother!!!!! lol
and i hate listening to the radio.... the lady's voice annoys me for some reason.... il just listen to Green Day and Rammstein!!!! 
YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!  |
MJ
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 895 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:31am You see!All that that happened to you. Not drinking just not being able sleep. It inspired you. You need to find something to inspire the rest of it. Ask around and ask your friends to tell similar stories. Their stories might end up being lame but it might help. |
Mike's Bitch
Geek
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 461 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:38am thanks for the advice!!!
im goin now... see you around and take care!!!!! |
MJ
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 895 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:40am Bye bye. Any time. Good luck writting! You sound like you'll be a whole lot greater than I dream of! |
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
  | January 5th, 2007 at 07:46am Erm...I don't like it much. Its very cliche, and the flows kind of off. But I like one line. "Its on demand"
Keep working though. We all go through our trite-topic-phases... |
MJ
Idiot
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 895 | January 5th, 2007 at 07:49am My poetry even annoys me! I also kinda liked that line though... But heck... I just wish I'd stop writting about love and heart brake and such shit... Anyway... got some poetry at home on my laptop so I'll bring that around sometime... |
