Changing Rose Petals

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C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97

Mibba
February 9th, 2007 at 05:12pm
This is the first poem I wrote in a while....how do you like it. Be honest please.

Could you be the beautiful rose,
That often gleams in the moonlight?
Or would you be in the darkness,
That feeds on my lustfilled soul?

If, and when, the sun shatters,
And the pieces fall into your eyes.
You're mascara will be running, babe,
Leaving behind black tears.

The sun, bringing out the best of you,
The moon, bringing out the worst.
Your heart is in the shadows,
Your head is in the clouds.

At this moment yesterday,
Your fears had gone unseen.
But as of today, my love,
You're dead inside.

What has become of you?
Your kiss bitterly sweet.
Choking on the butterflies,
That make you.

From red to black,
You're rose petals have changed.
But still you're beautiful,
Even when all innocence is lost.
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Mibba
February 9th, 2007 at 05:32pm
Wow...
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97

Mibba
February 9th, 2007 at 05:37pm
Hehe....hello again...and thanx love
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