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Dead End Girl
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Dead End Girl
Age: 32
Gender: Female
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March 20th, 2007 at 11:28pm
I've had the first verse floating around in my head for a while, and I thought up the last part recently. I thought it finished out the song nicely.
Basically, it's about some doubts I've been having and being in a relationship you can't leave without hurting a person you care about.



I can't stop feeling torn in two
I can't stop fighting myself
I can't stop thinking myself into corners
I feel like a racehorse with four broken legs
Pretty soon I'll be sniffing glue

If I had a heart
I'd let you break it
If I had a soul
I'd let you take it
If I had a mind
I'd give it all to you
If I wasn't such a liar
I wouldn't tell you my love was true

I've got a bad feeling
This whole thing makes me sick
I can't save you without tearing you apart
So his is what it's like
To be a fly on the ceiling

If I had a heart
I'd let you break it
If I had a soul
I'd let you take it
If I had a mind
I'd give it all to you
If I wasn't such a liar
I wouldn't tell you my love was true

Just give me one chance
(Woah)
I swear for one dance
(Woah)
I'm sorry I'm so bad at this
I'm sorry that I cannot kiss
Cause I've been falling down inside
And I can't keep that feeling this is not right

That this is not alright
Spicy Librarian!
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Spicy Librarian!
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March 20th, 2007 at 11:30pm
I really like the "If I had a heart" line.

The whole thing had nice flow. I like it. Very Happy
PaNcAkEs
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March 21st, 2007 at 02:59am
the chorus is awesome. actually, in the whole, its all awesome.
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