Crushed Emotions

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Deernt.
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Deernt.
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Mibba Blog
March 26th, 2007 at 08:20pm
Coolio Here's one I wrote a while ago.
No thought really put into it. But that's your job to decide that. XD

Crushed Emotions

Augmented anger.
Diminished content.
A minor conspiracy.
A major let down.

Your gestures of generosity;
immediately smeared into oblivion,
All because of my crushed emotions.
No thankful greeting.
No loving mood.
Only built up unhappiness from
...the soul within...

Forced to be apologetic
Reluctant in wanting to please
Nothing changes,
except my crushed emotions.

They'd shatter to countless pieces
but they stay fresh internally.
These emotions are more everyday.


Have a blast. Fizz
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March 29th, 2007 at 02:02pm
I liked it.

Though, for me, I found that you used the word "emotions" a little too much.
That's my only camplaint though.

Very good!

Forced to be apologetic
Reluctant in wanting to please


Loved that.
Deernt.
Rotting On Here
Deernt.
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Gender: Female
Posts: 48258

Mibba Blog
March 30th, 2007 at 03:01pm
^Thanks hun.
I agree, I used emotions too much. XD
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